Quiet Poetry Lounge : I'll fly away

PurpleMoons

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I'll fly away!!!

Thats what I heard them say.
And I will never forget
when my daddy flew away.

It was the 23rd of a cold January day.
The day he was born.
The day he went astray.

I can still see daddys big bluish gray brown eyes.
His heart had stopped and panic had arised.
As I stood there and watched without a clue of what to do
I gently bent over into his mouth, I blew
I blew for all the yesterdays when daddy held me close
I blew for all the days when daddy wiped my nose
I blew from my heart. I just couldn't let him go

Thats when he opened his eyes
as his heart grabbed a pace
but what I saw was unmistaken
Daddy was ready to fly away

Daddy glowed
He looked straight into my eyes
he smiled a smiled I had never seen
A peace from deep inside

I looked at daddy and I too smiled back
thats when we gently gave each other a nod
He knew how much I loved him
In every breath I blew, he felt my heart.

Oneday, I too will fly away!
Just let me glow like daddy did
and may my children be a witness
to this awesome, beautiful event.

Just that last moment
to show how much we love
Then I can fly away in peace
on the spirit of a dove.



I know I am a bit early daddy.. I just couldn't hold this inside!

HAPPY BORNDAY AND A PEACEFUL FLY AWAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I MISS YOU AND I'LL LOVE YOU FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!
 
wow this was so beautiful and heart felt deeply and it took me
back to my daddy day and how i watch him fly away to a place
i lone to know but my love he already know he too gave a smile
to let me know he reached the last mile of da way ....
A beautiful birthday gift this was he still glowing and smiling on u right now .
i'm so touched by this deeply in perfection sista wow...............................
 
:love: Thank you Brother Rich!
The passing of a loved one can be such a traumatic experience for the family left behind. Sometimes I wonder, if just for that second, daddy came back so it wouldn't be that way for me. I find myself feeling sad when I think about him. But not for long, because I will never forget that smile. I know you know what I mean!

Thank you for sharing that with me!!!! Now I'm smiling twice as wide!!!! :kiss1:
 

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