Black Poetry : I'll Be There

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by serenti-poet, Dec 18, 2003.

  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ill be there when you dont need me

    Ill be there even if you cant see me

    When your whole world falls apart

    Ill be there to protect your heart

    When you think things cant get worse

    Ill be there and stop your hurt

    When your tears fall with no end

    Ill be there as your friend

    When you feel like you cant go on

    Ill be there for you to lean on

    Ill be there when you least expect

    Ill be there so dont forget

    When you feel like no one cares

    I promise you

    I'll be there

    :geek: (through the computer that is) :)
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Serenti this is off the :spinstar: charts. :spinstar: I really like this flow.

    If I think of you.
    I have you by my side.
    Comforting me.
    Consoling all of my woes.
    I could never forget you girl.

    You are constantly on my mind.
     
  3. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh this was sweet....and Protectfull.




    Huge SerentI!





    Love L
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    indeed... i feel ya
    likes dis one
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was really sweet
    it reminded me of a
    card you could send
    someone..."Lovely"
     
  6. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HODEE-

    I'm glad to know I'm helping you out
    More than protection I care about
    How I can help you in many ways
    hold me close and near, day by day

    YOU are constantly on MY mind

    thanks for all the luv fam :)
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this was a sweet piece right here...
    keep flow'n gurl...
    one love
    khasm
     
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