Black Poetry : Ignited

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Combustion has happened
    Sparks have turned into a smoldering flame
    Sticks have been rubbed together just so,
    Now the kindle shall never be the same

    Candle of jasmine flickers
    emitting aroma through the air,
    the scent of flowers and melting wax
    so tempting, beckoning me to it's aromatic lair

    Sun's rays scorches, then torches
    passions forest, smoke billows
    maples' sap pines, dripping upon
    wild flowers and willows

    Mere mention of his touch
    ignites...spontaneously
    His being sets flesh aflame
    and the fire has permeated me
    Internally
    I burn
    with 3rd degree passion
    I yearn
    Ignited
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watz:
    Now this was passion laced
    without a doubt. I like, I like, I like.
    Look at you bringing the fyah.
    Go head wit yo bad self.:)


    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I'll ignite ya fire
    to a blazzin flame
    from hot passion
    never tame
    turn da switch
    wit a slow grind
    sending a electric charge
    rock u deep wit ingite rod
    as the flickering candle
    sway in glo
    compassion roll like
    never before
    as outdoors life creep in
    to watch da lovin trend
    of us igniting wildfire
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4Everluv, I try to bring the passion on occasion, lol. Thank you for the kudos poetess.

    You've ignited me
    so now the blaze has been lit
    I looked to see who struck
    the match, and you're it
    That lightening rod sent
    an electrical surge
    The pulsating current
    has given me the urge
    Close those drapes to keep
    our secret from passers by
    Cut those lights
    and watch those sparks fly
    This passionate loving trend
    was simmering at the beginning
    and now the heat has no end

    Thank you Rich, for the flowback.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now ya set ablaze
    ignited wit a crave
    let me sensualize
    ya body
    wit my steamy hot fire
    there's no ending
    to body mending
    when we lock
    to extreme shock
    from da surge of
    my ele-care
    that's alerted wit flair
     
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    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOOOFFF....

    Just like 'dat.

    Sister, you rhyming is impeccable. Thank you for sparking thoughts and igniting Spirits. You are blessed.

    One.

    ~Ikoro
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich,

    Set ablaze with a style
    only you possess
    You deliver an uncontrollable
    inferno within your deep caress
    Even the power lines are melting
    under this extreme heat
    Feeling the bed quaking
    As the lava boils under the sheet
    Who can help but get so excited
    I've been thoroughly ignited.

    Ikoro, that was such a kind comment, thank you. Please bless us with some more of your flows.
     
  8. Alkebulan

    Alkebulan Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this works 4 me! u've still got it sister Watzinaname :hearts1:
     
  9. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    whew...this is sensual...like a symphony, it just swells and surges...beautiful clear visuals, wish i was there.

    i love the form, the rhythm. you just have that gift, a touch...
    phenomenal write
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well hey there Alkebulan, gee, I haven't read anything from you in what seems like ages. Thank you brotha, appreciated much.
    If the visuals are like crystal to you, then I must have done something right, abstract. You humble me so, thank you very much for your kindness and critique.