Black Poetry : If*????.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Feb 5, 2002.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    If i cryed out to u would u come
    if i slept inside ya heart would u
    comfort me close
    if i told u how much i love u
    would u hurt me

    If i walked wit u will walk by my side
    if i offer u all of me would u accept
    if my emotions was torn
    would u mend ????

    If i call u late would u stay up
    to listen intently
    if i was u would u be me
    if i whisper could u hear me
    I wonder of u and da things u do
    but if i give u da world what would
    u do wit it ..


    :eek:
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH-NE$$!!!!!!!!!!


    i ab(SOUL)ute-ly love this!!!

    ...& to answer your question,
    if you gave me the world... what
    i'd do... is be content to share it
    with You!! :D

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  3. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poet poet poet...

    you gonna have thme falling out again...tight scribe poet...

    NOTE TO SELF: STOCK UP ON SMELLING SALTS
     
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    UL820 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    richly written
     
  5. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ma royal richness...i would cherish it, as long as i could share it with you:eek:. very nice, dear poet.
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sunshyne

    u would share it wit me .......da world awe!!! too sweet
    shyne in my heart as u do:heart: :cool:
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Mr.D big thanks i need protection!:D


    UL thankz bru..:)
     
  8. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Rich!

    Thoroughly enjoyed the read!
    thanks!:)
     
  9. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very kewl...

    read $R...

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  10. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte joynt $$RICH$$