Black Poetry : if...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Jul 25, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Silly games…..
    You play…I hope your listening…
    Get a real good meaning out of this..
    What if the shoe was on the other foot?
    And I said all you said?

    Do unto others as you have done to me!
    Don’t think I got fear…
    I come real....
    Black man!
    Can you?

    Would I still be a woman
    As you think you are a man?
    If I played your games on you?
    Black man!
    What if I stay out late….
    Who then will you blame…
    Soul of satan..Twisted rhythm
    Don’t play me
    Black man!
    This is your final notice..
    Look at all you have done
    I thought you would see but you don’t…
    It’s like a roller coaster ride….
    Up and down
    Back and forth
    With a burning desire inside
    But…..
    Silly games
    You play…I hope your listening
    Get a real good meaning out of this..
    If i did all you have done?
    How would you feel?
    Mental Tease….Playa
    Black man!....
    What would you do?
    Could you even handle it?
    If the shoe was on the other foot?
    And the thing of it.....I care to much to
    Put you though a game
    I am real...Can you come real?

    A BlkAngel Thang
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done speak on !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To play with a heart, is to play with fire. Nothing funny about playing with feelings. This was posed on point.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the read..Rich and Watz
    this is one i had tuck away
    thought i post it its a year old
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel....

    Tell it like it T I is. :D

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you on this:)

    tight flow.....flow on:heart:
     
  7. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ma, I'm feeling you more and more each day! Real tight.