Black Poetry : If You're Fine...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Aug 2, 2001.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok, So if you're fine
    I won't come around anymore...

    I won't even call you
    Like I used to

    I won't write endlessly
    To kill the anger you might feel

    So if you're fine
    Does that mean
    I'm out of your life

    Or are you just saying that
    SO I won't mind

    So if you're fine
    Why are you crying

    And when you talk to me
    Why do you look away

    Talk to somebody else
    While your talking to me

    Because you feel
    Embarrassed
    It had to end up this way

    So if you're fine
    I'll go on my own way

    But I know you're not fine
    With the outcome
    I'll be by yourside
    All the way....


    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HUMMM! NICE STORM

    WOW! I LOVE YA LAY OUT
    IF ONE CAN'T LOVE U LIKE U LOVE
    I SAY COOL BUT SEEM LIKE IT'S A DONE DEAL
    WELCOME TO LIFE........:heart:
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ... Hummm Thanks Rich , Ha ha ha
    Desert Storm
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DS

    Hey gurl ... good to read you again! Thanks for droppin' this piece sista!


    One :heart:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    storm you deep
    man this was some deep stuff
    i like it very much

    Peace my sista

    DSS
     
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