Quiet Poetry Lounge : if you.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by luvNwords, Sep 23, 2003.

  1. luvNwords

    luvNwords Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if you only knew how much i want to be with you
    if you knew how much i practice my lines
    the night before just so i'm able to carry on a convo with you
    if you knew how sweaty my hands
    get whenever i'm near you
    if you knew how fast my heart beats
    whenever i hear your name
    if you only knew how everyone disappears
    in a room when you walk thru the doors
    would you give me a chance then???
    or would you continue to surround
    your heart with fear of me not being sincere with my words
    well i'm as sincere as i can get
    i want you in so many ways
    on so many levels
    and its not because you're beautiful
    but its because of the way you make me feel
    i feel like i'm a kid again and you're my first crush
    the only difference is, then i didnt know
    how to love, but now i know
    and i know that i want to love you
    if you will only let me!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    from the heart if one only knew !
    dis was tyte
    expressing true love
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwww! This is both sweet and tight....
     
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    luvNwords

    Those are the true words of true love. Those are really some luving words. Isn't it funny how no one else is in the room. How there is a quiet storm in front of all the noise. I really like feeling that way.. it never seems to work out though. Especially with the one you adore on this level. If they only knew. If they only would take the ride. Maybe it would have been to intense. For them. And they knew this. So they brush it aside, not taking that ride for fear of feeling the same. Those I found.. that avoid the real.. is hiding and running from being hurt again. So I tell them. Lets not play that game. It's OK I understand. They are afraid. Of being hurt, so they walk eyes half open into meaningless relationships one after another. While all you can do is watch them destructively. Fall in and out of false beginnings. But your willing to go through anything to play this one out with them. If they only knew.
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was definitely beautiful...i know this feeling very well.
     
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    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if you knew how reading this made me feel...
    if only you knew that you are such a blessing....
    if you knew that love is in you already!
    hey, i am loving this right here. keep on keepin' on!