Black Poetry : If You See Yourself...smile

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  1. .DR TREGGE

    .DR TREGGE Member MEMBER

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    i did nothing against you
    most everything for you
    for no reason other than love
    or, deep unselfish like if you will....

    yet your repayment for what
    has become my folly
    was to misuse the aforementioned
    bragging upon the simpleness with which you manipulated me....

    a whispered promise here
    an almost display of fraudulent affection there
    how cruel a supposed nurturer
    you turned out to be....

    and now, you have your wish fulfilled
    i'm to the curb, kicked...you would
    proclaim rather voraciously to your artistic co-horts
    as your joviality belies my heartbreak....

    i am down...but not out
    bloodied, but unbowed
    know that a spirit such as mine..shall never
    illuminate your presence again....

    and yet, for the harsh lesson learned-i thank you
    because had i not encountered you, i could have
    never understood why the word *****
    is such an apt description!!!!

    .DR TREGGE
    (c)2001 all rights reserved:toast:
     
  2. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This description fits you clearly! ha ha ha

    Yeah, I know what you did to me

    Was so selfish and wrong
    And by the way no name calling
    After what you've done

    And in the words of Chris Rock

    I don't believe that it is the right approach
    But I understand you
    The most
    I understand you
    I do

    Difficult looking back
    What goes around comes around

    And the next time it will
    Be someone crying for you
    So don't be sad
    Mad
    Frustration
    Takes your concentration
    Off of the things you need to do

    And the longing is there
    You better be ware
    That it won't fade so quickly

    And you'll wish that they were back
    But then again you won't
    And feel free
    To do what you please

    And you'll know they did you a favor
    Because they weren't good enough
    For you
    In the beginning

    All they could care less
    About your feelings and emotions
    Resulting a bitter cycle
    Of destruction

    And that you
    Have reached the last straw
    And they're treading on thin ice
    But still you fall

    And feel like you lost
    And feel enraged
    Because you care about them so much

    I don't agree with this word that you use
    But I understand
    And wish
    I could only
    Hold you in my arms
    And fill you with my charms
    And soothe you inner soul
    And make you dream dreams
    Of shiny gold,and crystal visions fortold

    That's what I would do
    And me and you
    Could relate on past mistakes
    And kiss all your fears away
    That's what I would do ....
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U R FELT

    IT'S A SADLY TRUE STORY
    I'VE BEEN IN THIS TOO MANY TYMES
    BUT FLOW ON MY BRUTHA
     
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