Black Poetry : If You See Yourself...smile #2

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  1. SAARONCROWELL

    SAARONCROWELL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Making it beyond your sacred threshold...
    ....Is akin to discovering a chicken with lips~
    Unless, I'm moving you out or in...
    ....Bringing you something you want/ need~
    Invitations to "that" sanctuary to me at least...
    ....Aren't forthcoming~
    So, I already know that I'll NEVER get to make...
    ...."That type" of trip!

    In case you should stumble and fall...
    ....I continue to be there for you~
    And yet, it boggles my mind...
    ....Ray Charles has better vision~
    Than a fool, whom by love...
    ....Now finds himself blind!

    I'm not the one who gets...
    ....That late in the evening~
    Midnight or sometimes later...
    ....Special, come be with me call~
    And although I'm here for you...
    ....Process this now, I won't be for long~
    Because sooner than you think...
    ....I'll be humming my exit song!

    And I recognize, that upon my departure...
    ....The very last thing you'll be is bereft~
    There'll be no remorse on your part...
    ....You've made off with enough loot to fill a treasure chest..quite
    a hefty haul~
    I realize now that I'll NEVER be her LOVER folks...
    ....I was just her ATM sponsor, and that is ALL!*

    *may you get ALL that you have COMING to you.

    SAARONCROWELL
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the depth of this

    is felt deep within me
     
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    SAARONCROWELL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU................

    $RICH$.....
    All that I can say is thank you.....mainly because the
    original version was much more raw and heaped with anger..
    until, that is, I processed that anger means relinquishing control
    to the one to whom it is directed. I don"t EVER want to give
    someone that I am at extreme odds with, control over me!:uzi:

    :spinstar: thanks for the read BRUH!:peace:

    ..............S.................
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heart Wrenching Reality

    Gotta watch out for those pretty gold diggers. Enjoyed the angle of this, especially...

    I realize now that I'll NEVER be her LOVER folks...
    ....I was just her ATM sponsor, and that is ALL!*


    $Wiser$
     
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