Black Poetry : If You Loved Me

[Peachislove]

He soothes my soul in the worst way
He holds me and our moment takes my pain away.
The feelings I have for him are strong...stronger than love can ever be
But guess what....this guy doesn't love me.
He loves the program of which we both chose to follow
I caught feelings and him not loving me is a hard pill to swollow
he's perfect in my eyes, and my hearts screamin to him
I guess I'm not loud enough
Because he can't hear my cries.
He prolly thinks I'm weak and too young to understand his past
but I'd go thru it with him, if I could be the woman he has.
I shake my head at how things could be
And I aint perfect but our love would be perfect if he loved me!

 

[4EVERLUV]

They say if, "IF" was a 5th we would all be drunk
and "IF" you do not feel his love then maybe
it's time that you dump him on the curb
like todays trash and yesterdays news
because "IF" he was really the right dude
you would feel his love and would be
writing "He loves Me" tunes
Never settle for less than the
absolute best than your heart and soul
can desire because you are a
strong beautiful queen and the right brotha
will recognize that and admire
you for you
The reason I am able to tell you this is
because I use to be you...
Writing thoses '"IF" He loved me blues​

Peachislove:
Your poem really touched me because
I know too well how your feeling
You should not have to deal with
stipulation love that is what I call it
"IF" this and "IF" that.
Its hard when love feels so good to you and only if...
But love is a 2way street.
This a very heart felt write, I really felt your
emotions here. Very nice scribe

Much Luv

 

[watzinaname]

I think many can relate to your words. Feelings for someone, so hard to walk away from them. But the longer you think of what someone could do, you'll be missing out on what someone else, will do. Great write, and a great flow in response from 4Everluv.

 

[nevar]

they say all the round the world is the same song........baby girl if he couldn't see the precious jewel he has........then maybe he wasn't meant for ya..........maybe God wanted you to be with someone that could measure up to a diamond like you........Rise my queen...........

 

[$$RICH$$]

heavyu hitting seem like one didn't see da core of yo soul maybe u need to
make a change