Black Poetry : If You Loved Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Peachislove, Dec 15, 2007.

  1. Peachislove

    Peachislove Member MEMBER

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    He soothes my soul in the worst way
    He holds me and our moment takes my pain away.
    The feelings I have for him are strong...stronger than love can ever be
    But guess what....this guy doesn't love me.
    He loves the program of which we both chose to follow
    I caught feelings and him not loving me is a hard pill to swollow
    he's perfect in my eyes, and my hearts screamin to him
    I guess I'm not loud enough
    Because he can't hear my cries.
    He prolly thinks I'm weak and too young to understand his past
    but I'd go thru it with him, if I could be the woman he has.
    I shake my head at how things could be
    And I aint perfect but our love would be perfect if he loved me!
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They say if, "IF" was a 5th we would all be drunk
    and "IF" you do not feel his love then maybe
    it's time that you dump him on the curb
    like todays trash and yesterdays news
    because "IF" he was really the right dude
    you would feel his love and would be
    writing "He loves Me" tunes
    Never settle for less than the
    absolute best than your heart and soul
    can desire because you are a
    strong beautiful queen and the right brotha
    will recognize that and admire
    you for you
    The reason I am able to tell you this is
    because I use to be you...
    Writing thoses '"IF" He loved me blues

    Peachislove:
    Your poem really touched me because
    I know too well how your feeling
    You should not have to deal with
    stipulation love that is what I call it
    "IF" this and "IF" that.
    Its hard when love feels so good to you and only if...
    But love is a 2way street.
    This a very heart felt write, I really felt your
    emotions here. Very nice scribe

    Much Luv
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think many can relate to your words. Feelings for someone, so hard to walk away from them. But the longer you think of what someone could do, you'll be missing out on what someone else, will do. Great write, and a great flow in response from 4Everluv.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    they say all the round the world is the same song........baby girl if he couldn't see the precious jewel he has........then maybe he wasn't meant for ya..........maybe God wanted you to be with someone that could measure up to a diamond like you........Rise my queen...........
     
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    heavyu hitting seem like one didn't see da core of yo soul maybe u need to
    make a change
     
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    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man we love hard..dont we? I'm feeling your words, your heart, your pain, your flow! It's a hard lesson to learn and what I'm learning is that it love and pain knows no age...keep your head up my sister!!!!
     
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    Hi Peachislove
    This is a beautiful poem and sad. so sad
    Sometime we have to make a choice, because we can.
    Let it flow sis..Much Love


    Peace~N~Love
     
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    Love anyway...

    Wonderful piece here poet, very heartfelt...
     
  9. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    ^^ feel u sis....

    i remember feeling like this b4...
     
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