Black Poetry : "If you ever had to ask me if i Loved you" I'd say...

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  1. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if you every had to asked me if i loved you? i'd say...
    if it were possible i'd be the wind that wraps around your skin
    i'd be that flame dancing in your eyes
    if my words were visible you could see what lies inside
    if i had the ability i'd give you the vision to see my soul
    if it were mine i'd give you the earth beneath us, the sky above us, the ocean and the air between us
    i'd capture the light from the sun and the mysteries of the moon
    i'd paint a picture of forever in your mind and sign it with my heart's yearning
    when you think of me i'll be a breeze whispering in your ears i love you
    i'd make you my ebony king and give you my heart's key
    if it were possible we'd share eternity together and forever will be our theme
    when you're cold i'll be there to warm you/ when you're alone i'll be there to comfort you
    when you're anger i'll be there to scream "we'll fight off this world together"
    it is bittersweet our love for each other
    if possible i'd remember the first day i meet my soulmate perfectly
    i'd tell you u had me before you knew me
    you saw me before you seen me
    i'd show you that the sun only rises because the moon was curious to see what our love looked like when light was shined on it
    how strong, how deep, how significant, how true, how pure, how different i am i feel now that i've discovered and held on to, now that i know and belong to now that you have defined and lived up to
    words never could explain it because it was never meant to be understood just felt
    like when i tell you "i love you" i feel free
    butterflies, and stars in my eyes and knots in my stomach and wanting to feel you underneath my fingertips
    like standing in summer rain, and believing in dreams and only hearing the drums after we kissed
    like defying gravity and the first time i realized
    like talking without words
    like being and nothing more
    like having everything a rich man can't afford
    like saying all this when all you needed to know is that I LOVE YOU
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautiful. So sensual!!!

    If I haven't welcomed you to the family, let me do it now!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to this new family u found
    welcome Jazz4U from above
    as i take to this flow of love
    nice scribe u vibe in tune relax and enjoy !
    welcome:) :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    For real Jazz you a new one but you sure are becomming a favorite :)
     
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    sounds like someone is "In Love"
    I see what your were sayin, Jaz!

    keep flowin
     
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    this was tyte...
    welcome to da fam...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'd say...
    your response was beautiful.

    thanks for sharing it with us.

    and :wave: welcome to the family

    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  8. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awe

    Thanks to everyone that read and responded to my piece,
    i feel loved...lol
    and thanks for the welcome
    always love and respect
    j.
     
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