Black Poetry : if you don't mind

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  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes...
    when I hear things I know ain't true
    plain as day like "the sky ain't blue
    and clouds ain't white or gray"
    I want to say, oh, please...
    shet the eff up please...
    spin spun spun out
    all I want from them is
    to be out of my business
    out of my life
    keep me and my person
    out of your mouth
    help me out????
    that's a freakin' joke
    how bout you mind yo' business
    I got enough ish to wade through
    I ain't askin nothin' from ya
    I'm doin' as I'm directed
    and don't need to be affected
    by your bull ish
    I ain't askin' you nothin'
    because I don't want to hear
    more ish I've heard more than enough
    watching you point your finger
    at me plottin' and plannin'
    schemin' etc...
    then talkin' 'bout blame...
    if the choice was mine
    we simply would not exist
    one to another
    than there would be no lies
    the fact is
    I'm not spyin' on noone
    I ain't all up in noone's business
    ain' t complainin or blamin or framin
    or gamin'
    and all I want is the same...
    now ain't that some shame...
    I guess now I'll go back to
    doin' what I gotta do
    from my quiet corner...
    that is, if you don't mind...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed i felt this
    it seem that way sometime i too have my days
    of all u speak thanks for bringing it out in the open
    tyte
     
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    nice flow..
    i feel this at times
    but it do pass...
    hold on
    and hold your head high...
    this was tight
     
  4. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hellz yah, flo flo flo!:jumping:
     
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    very nice flow...
     
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