Black Poetry : If you don't know what it is, just leave it alone.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Queen_Nemesis, Sep 9, 2003.

  1. Queen_Nemesis

    Queen_Nemesis Member MEMBER

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    so many hearts broken and stole
    for some it's just too much to hold
    many souls don't know what love is
    much less personify it
    with cards,candy,flowers and teddy bears
    does that truely let you kow a person really cares?
    for some love is like a game
    so they find others who are easy to tame
    love is supposed to be like an everlasting shower
    soft too the touch but hidden is the power
    for some love is sex
    and for so long my mind has been vexed
    so many emotions that flow and flow
    so many words to describe it but this is indescribable
    i would rather wallow in my solitude
    than have some sex crazed animal destroy my mood
    my soul is quite fragile these days
    i hope you see that through my invisible haze
    or it is a shell or wall i have built around my self
    protecting what little dignity i have left
    this poem is not meant to put "the playas" in check
    it's meant to feed your intellect
    and before you go out and ruin a home, be careful
    becase if you don't know what it is, just leave it alone
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up !!!!!!!
    first to show it is to know it
    if u don't why play wit it
    leave it be ......
    i so much feel u here
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte flow...you bring it real
     
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    my sistah
    this is great
    yes wonderful
    flow poet
    Peace
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You really hit the nail on the head with this, and it's so beautifully expressed! Feelin dis.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i ma feelin yea here...
     
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