Black Poetry : If You Could See What I Feel

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jan 15, 2002.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How imaginative is your inner eye?

    Can it hold paintbrushes
    snap photos
    mold clay
    create a multimedia mix that
    can convey what it sees
    can it make you
    be here

    without you
    being here?

    If you could see what i feel
    you'd have a masterpiece
    something that would make you
    thousands of hollers
    and a whisper making love to your
    ear

    If you could see what I feel
    you could take it / put it in a bottle/
    rub it over any toy you like
    and imagine me

    If you could see what I feel
    you'd see that you are the Ace up
    my pants leg holding me....
    firm...ly...moving up and down
    until I present my Royal flush

    If you could see what I feel you
    could lay them on 5 lines and you'd
    have music to bate your mastur with
    and demand a raise....in
    temperature

    cause what I feel may make you sweat /
    so don't play with electric toys without
    rubber gloves

    or love without feeling
    you might end dying....for
    more.

    (c)2002 blakverb
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Verb,

    I see you got a muse in the Sun prompting your flow!!! :laugh:

    Tight!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    Ooooooo Weeeeee! This is :hot: :hot: :hot:


    Where ya' at Boo?! :lol: :lol:

    Lovin' your continous poetry cascades!!

    N2
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Royal BLak-NeSs.


    ok, ok, ok... what happened to "gentle"???

    & i gotta say it once more for the record... if You could
    see what i feel... ****! it would be phenomenal!

    You... are... like... so amazing at what you do!! & that
    still doesn't even begin to describe your talent!!

    i cain't wait for the book... the book(S)... by the way...
    did i tell you that i'm already the President of the
    SGP Fan Club?!! :D

    :heart:
    Ga~
     
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