Black Poetry : If you can sit at set of sun

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by one_love, Jul 14, 2002.

  1. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If you can sit at set of sun
    You will see the beauty be done.
    Feather like clouds disapear
    Yellow, orange, red, purple start to appear
    Sitting on a mexico cliff top
    Makes all of the sound stop
    Breathing in the wind
    and the world begins to spin
    The eyes feel the heat
    almost like a sound beat
    To look at the sun so bright
    fade into the night
    Feeling everything leave my mind
    and so I will find
    The real truth to life
    through out this beautiful sight.

    One_Love
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1love.


    this felt serene... extreme-ly. :)

    i loved the imagery & i enjoyed the read...
    thank you for sharing.

    alwayspeace.

    elayne.
     
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    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA_Sunshyne

    Thanks for the read. It's been a while since I've written a piece.
    One_Love
     
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    Gotta say that I dug this too!!!

    Reas