Black Poetry : If you can read my mind...(for the ladies)

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  1. tbone5769

    tbone5769 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If you could read my mind….
    It would be telling you what I
    Really want to do.
    What I really feel for you…
    If you could read my
    mind you would Say
    I feel what your saying boo,
    But I can’t help that feel
    If you don’t reveal
    Your thoughts to me.
    But I have an idea of the scene that will take place
    By the sly look on your face….
    And that look is saying….
    Girl I need Your Steamy, creamy
    Dreamy
    Luscious plush soft, and warm
    Rain in the storm…….sex
    That I want to get next
    To Cause I know the things that you do are mind blowing
    Hot water in the snowing
    Mountain tops full of you and your softness….and
    If you could read my mind
    You would see me smiling inside
    Cause I know it’s good
    Better than a tall glass of Ice tea in the middle of
    July
    So good make a brotha wipe a tear from his eye.
    From the sensation of the creation of the explosion of
    Emotion that overflows from the lyrical gyrations,
    That my body and your body send….leading
    To that climatic end.
    And we read each other’s mind
    With a smile that says everything
    We want to say……
    And we will continue to read each other’s minds
    Till the sun comes up…
    In the morning….of the next day.
    Read me……
     
  2. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tbone,

    I love the way you flo'd this. I could hear it spoken. I enjoy reading your work. Thanks for the mental trip.

    Madd Holiday Greetings :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yup

    I saw you smilin as you wrote each word of this..... cool
     
  4. tbone5769

    tbone5769 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Vision

    Man, I cant begin to think of all the visions I've had of the anticipation of that day when two souls meet "like that" hmm hmm hmmm! Had to put it down

    you know?

    one love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nicely well done poet

    u be on target !!
     
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