Black Poetry : IF WE COULD ........haiku

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lastnight we couldn't
    becoz u was not alive
    just dead drunk
     
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    dissappointing situation, RICH, but a nice haiku just the same.

    Zhay
     
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    ooooh

    WOW!

    feelin this! Message is too clear!
    thank you

    a
     
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    onzhay

    just working a piece of wisdom once told to me...thankz:)
     
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    Alyce gurl let me tell ya

    it's a shame how love
    can be so drunk & blind
    in tymes of need.......****!
    sometyme the bottle can pack a banggggg!!

    Thankz sis 4 da read:)
     
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    $RICH$

    Very poignant haiku...

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    big thankz Epip

    just working dem keyz a bit .....Thankz:D
     
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    bin there.

    Hell! I just took what I wanted and then some.
     
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    Rich

    Loving the respectful, gentleman that you are...:heart:


    Yeshujah...you KNOW you ain't right!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    yeshujah

    man i just couldn't
    wouldn't even known i was there!
    hell i thought about it...
     
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