Black Poetry : if u want me to stay

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by geminit, May 30, 2003.

  1. geminit

    geminit Member MEMBER

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    If u want me to stay
    I will be your sunshine
    in your dark days

    your voice
    in your silence

    your joy
    in your eyes

    your smile
    on your face

    I will be your summer in the cold
    your rainbow in the rain
    the beat of your heart
    the blood in your vein

    I will be the dream of your night
    and when you open your eyes
    'cauze a new day's coming
    I will be there again
    to be the reawake of your morning

    and I will be all that you need
    .. if you just want me to stay
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME TO THA FAMILY!!

    This is a very nice piece you've blessed us with I hope to read more from you. Until then peace unto you and keep flowin...
     
  3. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Indeed Welcome to Destees!!! :toast: :toast: :toast:
    That was a very beautiful piece
     
  4. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like that... makes me wanna tell my man "i'll be that...."
    so, did you stay?... keep flowing

    peace
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERY NICE PIECE INDEED!
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we hope you stay and post more poetry!
    Peace to ya, poet!
     
  7. geminit

    geminit Member MEMBER

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    Thank yo'll 4 ur great luv!! :heart: :heart:
    I will try to give u the same!!
    Peace ;)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed welcome to the house of love
    here on destee.com due stay upon our family
    be part of our growth in unity
    this was a very sweet piece
    continue flowin upon ya new home
    welcome to the family
     
  9. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A heartfelt poem...very nice!
     
  10. geminit

    geminit Member MEMBER

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    Hey RICH
    Thank u 4 ur welcome
    n 4 making me feel part of dis
    Really appreciate!! ;)
     
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