Black Poetry : IF U ONLY KNEW WHAT HEAVEN KNOWS...

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If you only knew what heaven knows...

    You'd take my change in stride
    You wouldn't let our different opinions collide
    You'd take my hand and set the petty **** aside
    You would never front on me, disapointment me, or lie

    Your frustration would never be taken out on me
    And no matter the situation, you would never doubt me
    Your love would be unconditional, no limits, no regrets
    You'd give me the inspiration in the same respect

    See, baby if you only knew what heaven knows...

    You wouldn't question my opinions, you'd try to see from my point of view
    See where I'm headed, use ur mind and heart to point me too
    You wouldn't second guess yourself nor claim this as a mistake
    Take me as I am, and accept the worse with the great

    Leaving would be out of the question
    Needing me would be the only section
    of our book of love and lessons
    Cuz breathing wouldn't be easy if I was absent

    If you only knew what heaven knows...

    We would never have to argue over whats, where's, and why's
    Cuz you would already know no matter I say, I care and I try
    You would feel what I feel and connect with my vibe
    You'd be down for whateva, hold my down- no matter what I decide

    If you only knew what heaven knows...

    You would never look for another or creep with a person
    Cuz its like why am I here? Why do u love me? Whats my purpose?
    You wouldn't cry at night, you would never have to wonder
    Love would live through fall, winter, spring, and summer

    You'd trust in my faith and follow my lead
    Never deal with the drama of what you feel you believe
    Matter of fact, you'd believe in what I concieve
    If I cry you cry, If I smile you smile, when I bleed you bleed

    If you only knew what heaven knows...

    This poem wouldn't even exist
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was...wow....i like this alot...
     
  3. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK U LOVELY...
     
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    That's real nice. I'm likin' this one too. It has a lot of spirit to it.
     
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    Tighter than my dad's pockets......and that's pretty [email protected] tight. :D
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LMAO LMAO LMAO thanks yall... Sasse, girl u are soooo crazy!!
     
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    This is intense, poeticlyspeakin. I like it.

    People have a hard time allowing each other to move on and grow. It's important to recognize that you deserve a supporting cast that will help you to achieve your dreams.

    Keep on being honest and expecting honesty in return.
     
  8. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks baby...
     
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    this is tight
     
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    thanks mzblk...
     
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