Black Poetry : IF U ONLY KNEW ME

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U WOULD KNOW HOW I LOVED
    IF U ONLY KNEW ME!
    U WOULD SEE ME AS I AM
    NOT WHAT U WANT ME TO BE
    IF U ONLY KNEW ME !
    U COULD SEE MY HEART OF
    HONESTY AND CARE

    YET U NOT SEE ME FOR ME
    BUT WHO U WANT ME TO BE

    IF U ONLY KNEW ME !
    U WOULD HEAR MY SONG I SING
    U WOULD LISTEN TO MY WHISPERS
    OF LOVE I VOW WITHIN ME
    IF U ONLY KNEW ME !
    U WOULD COME UPON ME WITH GRACE
    AND LOVE AND OUR HEARTS BE OF ONE
    IF U ONLY KNEW ME!
    BUT.....U SEE ONLY WHAT U WANNA SEE
    AND THATS NOT ME...
    IF U ONLY KNEW.
     
  2. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Standing Ovation!!!

    Rich I felt the emotion in this peice dog... sometimes I feel like no one knows me but me and then sometimes I wonder if I know myself...lol da poem was tight dog!!!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My $$RICHNE$$...

    i just wanna know... who she is...
    that's all... you been a scribin'
    *** these last few days... (LOL)

    this was felt my love... as always
    you bring beauty to the page...

    ShyninInYourRichness...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ if she only knew you bro...man, this was tight times 1,000,000. I can relate. well scribed poet.

    one love, blak
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HEY REASON I ROCK IN THE SAME BOAT
    THANX BRU...


    BLAKVERB ...
    IF SHE ONLY KNEW ~~~~AND THE THINGS I CAN DO.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SUNSHYNE TYME AFTER TYME
    I SAY LOOK WITHIN THE MIRROR
    WHAT DO U SEE......AND THEM
    I AM FORTH THE ONE .
     
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    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is truly an emotioal piece... I loved it...
    sounds like some misunderstandings goin on....
    Better spell it out for her so she doesnt have to wonder..

    8th
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    8th SHO YA RIGHT
    I GUESS I'LL SPELL IT IN BIG LETTERS
    THANX SIS! 4 DA READ
     
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    if she doesn't know His $$RICH$$NESS
    after reading this
    she will never know

    beautiful flow

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    CINDY~~~~ BABY TO KNOW ME IS TO KNOW SELF
    IF U LOVE U THEN U LOVE ME
    I AM WHO I AM AND WHAT I AM TO BE
    SEE ME AS I SEE U
    AND U BE ME AS I AM U
    MY LOVE IN MOTIONS
     
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