Black Poetry : If tomorrow never comes

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If you wake up tomorrow
    And find that for me there will be no more tomorrow
    Please don't cry or pain with sorrow
    For I am gone to another place where with God there will be plenty of tomorrows

    No, I won't leave you
    My spirit will just moved to another place, I will always be with you
    I will guide you through life, I will always see you through
    I will just be one of God's helpers, an angle that will always be with you
    So please don't shed a single tear for me for this day was destined for me and you
    Be happy that I'm in a better place I will save a seat next to me for you

    When you need money, don't be surprise when a job calls for you
    When you need a shoulder to lean on, don't be surprise when you feel my prescence by you
    When you cry tears of sorrow, don't be surprise when thoughts of joy stop them from falling from you
    Yeah, those will be the times when I am right by you
    The angel with wings that will cry FOR you
    I will be there FOR you

    We have come a long way
    But tomorrow I can not stay
    God has given me signs that he wants to take me away
    He wants this to be my last day
    Don't worry though, don't let this news turn your sunny skies gray
    For even if tomorrow never comes, I won't be far away
    At least I had the chance to say bye to you today


    Love,
    A angel fallen astray
     
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    Sun Ship Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem is powerful krazelyricks, I humbly and sincerely ask, explain to me its deeper meaning, so I can understand all of what it means.

    Peace,

    Brother Sun Ship
     
  3. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Actually I've been going through some stuff that has caused me to write this. It's crazy but I don't want to go into it. Just know that it's serious enough that I feel I have to write this. Thanks Brother Sunship for feeling this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    This was deeply felt within the walls of my heart
    soemtime we go through things that we seem to not bare
    all i ask is that you hold on ........feel the emotional state of this.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another well written piece, and I, like Sunship, am very curious about the depths of this one. Let me say this, there are moments in life that make you feel as if another day is too much. And for those times, you have to strive to make it one second at a time, then that second will turn into a minute, an hour, and so forth. Before you know it, you have made it thru another day. Keep on pushing krazelyricks, and keep writing.
    Love ya sis.
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well thank you Rich for feeling me
    I don't know, have you ever felt like you weren't living up to your purpose daily?
    That the one thing God put you on earth for you were dodging steadly?
    I have... I guess that's why I keep going on journey after journey
    It seems writing is the only thing that comforts me
    Yet I'm not getting anything in regards to it so I do the only thing that does give me recognition......trapping in the hood by me
    But yesterday when I pulled out a gun after a long time my life flashed before me
    I saw my life in the eyes of the screaming lady
    I saw the future, me in a body bag, and when I went to hit the lady
    With the butt of the gun I stopped quickly
    I let her go and I put my gun down with tears flowing
    My pride was hurt and continued to hurt until the morning
    I started thinking, that's not the life I want for me
    Yet when I look at my writing, it too is not doing **** for me
    I'm not published, it could be years like Lenardo and Divinchi
    You know, I don't want that to me
    However I don't want to die because of fast money
    It's crazy
    The more and more I think, the more and further away I get from my journey
    It's hopeless
    Yet when I read a poem by mzblkangel I decided to get down on my knees and asked God to forgive me
    I know even through the toughest times God will deliver me
    And hopefully he will help me through this too
    Maybe one day I will get discovered for my writings
    I'm leaving the fast life alone and starting
    on another path.....
    However because of what happened yesterday I fear for my life because I didn't do what I was suppose to
    One day, and one day soon they will come to me and get me
    Whether they beat me, kill me, or rape me
    They will do something for not doing the task they set for me
    Please know if tomorrow never comes I did decide to start another path permanently
    If tomorrow never comes........give recognition to me
    Don't let me be another Lenardo or Devinchi
    Tell everyone goodbye for me :crying:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i do feel you and understand
    but lay GOD in your life
    let him take your hand
    he will guide you to greater recognition

    what great gift he blessed you with will
    ride shelfs cross the world just believe
    those whom seek will forget and allow u
    to move in the direction u need to be and
    get your just due for the creation of a creator.

    surely u won't be another Lenardo or Devinchi

    just hold on , don't give up and find prayer .....
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh I will. I will. I will pray until I can't pray any more. I don't want to cause harm to anyone but I will to defend mine.
     
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    we all behind you 100% ..............trust me it will remove itself
    and bring you your glory & goodness ahead for i know what u
    face .
     
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    this is really beautiful you are mad talented
     
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