Black Poetry : If This Isnt Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, May 12, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Home is where the heart is, but my heart isn't her
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    Im floating on a cloud, Im officially a flyer
    It started from groud zero, each day it gets higher and higher
    Dwelling in pure ecstacy, livin off this burning desire
    It stings, but it feels good, ive never felt such fire

    Im breathing fresh air, oxygen is never felt better
    It runs thru me and brings some unexplainable pleasure
    Im sailing on his ocean, experiencing all types of weather
    When that breeze hits me, i begin to release pressure

    Singin to ur music and memorizing every single note
    Ur words are poetic, they run thru me and stun me w/ every quote
    And when u say my name, oh yes... i begin to float
    I fall into the deep waters of his soul and just soak

    I start running with my imagination, creating graphic scenes
    They travel from night to day, from distant thoughts to dreams
    My dreams and reality live in the same place it seems
    Where we live in a palace as a king and queen

    If this isn't love, then i guess... Im infatuated.
     
  2. kaly

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    infatuation

    I'm speechless
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Got to love this feeling you convey so well.
    Peace to ya!
     
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    i loved it. it takes my breath away.
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful. infatuated beyond my control that's what I call it. SO beautiful poet i always get what I expect from your work and that's always the absolute BEST. lol nice flow peace and blessins keep flowin
     
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    very nice....
     
  7. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u so very much, but i cant say the best, im just a beginner, theres more things i need to experience and learn.
     
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