Black Poetry : If the World was Crowded With Angels?

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  1. YingYang11

    YingYang11 Active Member MEMBER

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    If the darkness was gone?
    If all the demonic presences of Earth vanish?
    If the world was crowded with Angels?

    Who will teach us to not be greedy?
    To be thankful of the things that we receive?
    Who would show us the great values of Love and Justice?

    Who would be our saviors?
    Who will lead us to the path of light and righteousness?
    Who will help us to learn the importance of cleansing our sins?

    If the darkness was gone?
    If all the demonic presences of Earth vanish?
    If the world was crowded with Angels....​
     
  2. YingYang11

    YingYang11 Active Member MEMBER

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    Sorry the Title should be "If the World was Crowded with angels"
     
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    Couple of things YingYang11, if you look at the top right of this Thread and click this:

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    You will be able to edit the spelling in the title. But thanks for this post of explanation, I wondering for a minute :)





     
  4. 1poetsought

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    As the Yin and Yang have it, a profound thought.
     
  5. YingYang11

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    @1poetsought:Thank you for recognizing my user name.You are the only one who made an connection to it and the things that I wrote. I LOVE POETRY!!!
     
  6. Kadijah

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    Not really. I'm sure I'm not the only poster who knew what your user name signified with your very first post, just saw no reason to make a point of it. :10500:
     
  7. YingYang11

    YingYang11 Active Member MEMBER

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    No, I don't think it was that obvious Kadijah.:10500:

    Thanks for commenting though:)
     
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    Kadijah Banned MEMBER

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    Yea, most folk are familiar with the yinging and the yanging, and you're welcome. :)
     
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    Love it..
     
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    Nice poem bruh... :toast:

    What I think she means it that it's common knowledge that these represent opposites. Just like your poem. The opposite of angles is the Jhin, they are demons that dwelled in darkness.

    BTW, do you have any more?

    Peace!
     
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