Black Poetry : If She Despises Us...

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  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If she despises...

    The sensuous rhythm
    Of your sistah's walk,
    The depths of her wisdom,
    Each time she talks.

    The way her lips dance
    Whenever she sings,
    Her wonderous hue of colors
    Amongst other things,

    If she despises us...

    If she doesn't love us
    Your sistahs <---> my brotha,
    How can she truly...
    Love you???

    Help me understand.



    Copyright © 2002 by Joyce Rogers
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!!! DIS SPEAK LOUD WIT GREAT POWER OF NOTION
    MINDFULLY GOT ME WONDERING ...........DO SHE LOVE ME!
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the read Bruh:)...just tryin' to understand dat.
     
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    very interesting!
    i wanna know more!
    i wanna ask questions!
    but this is a poem...
    and i'm nosey. :D
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    You are.....? Goddess of innermost thoughts, giver of wisdom and fruit, you are the student of knowledge who has sat at the feet of the master. You are ordained and spit life times of Ahnks. Joyce I am feeling you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    this here is my favorite read for today.
    great peice Joyce
     
  7. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wildflower: Thanks for the read. Feel free to ask any questions
    you wanna ask...I promise to answer...ifn' I can.

    Brotherman: Whew! What a reply. Though I ain all dat...it's nice
    to know somebody might I am. :lol: preciate cha!

    lonelypoet: Thanks for the kind reply...glad you felt me on this
    issue.
     
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    Apparently...

    She doesn't possess self love but...self despise:(
     
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    Deep!!

    And a good Question!!
    I can dig it!!
    Tyte flo Poet!:)
     
  10. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AfricanDancer:k Now that's a thought. I simply took it that they
    were just spiteful and prejudice. Yes, their problem
    lies within themselves...thanks for the insight.

    Rashad: Maybe there's a brotha dat can help me understand dis.
    Thanks for the read.