Black Poetry : if only

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, May 24, 2005.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if only
    he could
    wet
    my mind
    moisten it
    wit kowledge
    to continue living
    i want
    him 2 capture the world
    in his hands
    and
    masssage my thots
    calm me
    from worries
    of failure
    my fears
    of never suceeding
    enlighten me
    ease my stress
    plesure me
    until past problems
    of lonely nights
    no longer
    become
    future preminitions
    he could
    impregnate
    my mind
    with his inteligence
    at any given day
    at any given time
    i'd love to
    walk with him
    carrying our enlightend seed
    but first
    he must know
    if only he knew
    how to wet
    my mind
    in this necessary way.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    if only one knew !
    this was mad tyte
     
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    that verse was smooth

    sounds as though
    he's already wet your mind
    nice flow lil sista...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Eloquently posed, the wonders that one could behold, if only. So nice to read you again daroc.
     
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    Very nice and smooth. Keeping the thoughts wet enough to nourish the heart and mind.
     
  6. 1poetsought

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    You whet the appetite for more, daroc.
     
  7. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall for all the love and hodee and 1poetsought for bring this back up and around
    much love- aqppreciated
     
  8. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this wus a tyte flow keep doin the [email protected] thang