Black Poetry : If only you will let me...

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  1. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If only you will let me I will take you...
    and show you, and teach you everything
    you ever wanted to know about me...

    If only you will let me I can open my heart to you..
    across the deep oceans into that place of dividing soul
    and spirit...

    If only you will let me I can be the blue, the green, the yellow,
    the red and the gold of your world-I can be all the things that these colours represent to you..

    For mine might be just a momentary infatuation but if by chance its more than that, the waiting will kill me if I do not get to know you and you me...

    I will let you as far as you will let me...two hearts joined by man's intelligence, never met yet the intensity of the chemistry flowing through the pressing of every word on the keyboard.

    If only you will let me...space and time need not be our dillemma but our treasure...

    will you let me?
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i will let you
    swim in the ocean of ever-increasing currents
    that illuminate the reds and greens
    of these blue rapids.

    i will let you
    open the door of a swollen heart
    and part the sea of intense rivers
    that flow within me

    i will let you
    enter my world
    be my girl
    become as one
    in my miniature pond
    of happiness and fun

    if that is your wish,

    step unto me.:)

    ALWAYS LOVING THE FLOW OF YOU.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    as beautiful as dis who wouldn't let u
    be whom u be and see the love of thee
    so openly sweetly u be whom u b
    so I open the gates of heart
    feelin ya flow from the start
    to grasp the thoughts of u
    to know u
    and show u
    from where u r
    gently and so tenderly
    i caress ya words
    so i'll let u inside my flyte
    com upon me tonight
    inside my domain
    is where i whisper out
    ya name i will let u !!!

    ya hit top spot wit dis piece flow on sis.....as i let u .
     
  4. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwhhh me lawd! I'm a little weak at the knees right now so I can't string together a few intelligent words...I'm having a series of dizzy spells as I take in all this love!!!!!! ****..thanks guys..

    lo'