Quiet Poetry Lounge : If Only You Knew

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DestinyLove222, Sep 15, 2003.

  1. DestinyLove222

    DestinyLove222 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    IF ONLY YOU KNEW
    If only you knew
    how much I do
    truly love you
    Everytime I see you
    I remember the way we kissed
    the way we touched
    The way you would hold me
    and tell me that it was alright to be sad
    I thought our love would stand the test of time
    If Only You knew the way I still feel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    my sistah the depth of ya heart speaks true feelings here
    very nice expressed of emotions
    tyteeeeeee!!!
     
  3. DestinyLove222

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    Thank you Rich. I really appreciate it. My heart is hurting so much right now.
     
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    i deeply felt it my sistah
    please relax and unwined
    ease ya mind
    surely ya heart will fill up
    wit joy in time
    but yet my sistah remember
    ((U CAN LEAN ON ME !))
     
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    this is so beautiful
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautiful.... girl, I have been through these times before.. just remember to always stay true to yourself....sistah, i do hear your cries......
     
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