Black Poetry : IF ONLY YOU KNEW...

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If only you knew
    some of the things that I think...
    If I were a painter
    I'd water color you
    a full body image
    enhanced by your
    rich choco'lat hue
    others simply could not
    resist; they'd want
    to purchase the
    36x40 view
    of an
    "Emerging Blak Man"
    on canvas
    ...I would reply...
    it's not for sale,
    there's no option to buy
    it's a personal -- cause he's fine
    Like Water For Chocolate a
    muse so divine
    ~and maybe~
    If I were a musician
    I'd rehearse you all day
    conducting the orchestra
    in my heart that serenades
    and directs your very sway
    -of love with the proper
    prelusional timing
    just right for a show
    others would want to listen
    to this harmonious
    concerto
    ...but they are not allowed...
    can't hear your vocals
    this is 'instru[ME]ntal only'
    my Blak Man's Choco'lat
    Rain Song played loud
    ...it's personal - he's mine
    Like Kapellmeister, choirmaster
    musically inclined

    ~all of these things would be
    very true IF...If...
    [singing]
    If only
    you knew
    how much I do
    do love you....


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    now this was deep

    and that's on the real

    seeingntoursoul

    ~keep flowin'

    pd
     
  3. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah N2,

    Just keep on flowin' through my system like that!!!!

    I'm sure ta always know!!!! :wink:

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  4. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Felt this!

    Our Black Men are something wonderful aren't they! If only they knew. See,this is truly from a sistahs heart,I love this one. Feeling the same way. Stay true sis.
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DS ~~

    (those initial are the same as my real name....dayyyuum girl!!) :lol:

    Thanks again for reading a piece of ME!
    Glad ya' felt this one from the
    SoulurN2...tried, tested, and true!

    Peace sista-gurl!
     
  6. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Always Feelin you!

    Sistah,you know what we go through,I mean and even wit da mens,you know girl and I know,Sometimes they don't see so clearly at times,or something,they don't recognize you trying to be good to them and you really appreciate them. Gurl you know and I know. But keep yo head up girl,joy comes in the morning. You are a truly lovely sistah. So sweet.
    Faithfully,
    Desert Storm
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank ya' DS

    'nuf said!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WHAT!!!!!

    U TALKING BOUT ME!......GEEEEE!
    LOOK AT U MASTERING THIS PIECE
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ one...

    You got me smilin' so
    hard my cheeks hurt!!

    Thanks for the comps!!
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If you were a painter? you are. one who paints with words and every stroke you make adds to a masterpiece...if you only knew.

    one love,blak
     
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