Black Poetry : If Only You Knew (A True Story)

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  1. Vision

    Vision Active Member MEMBER

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    If Only You Knew (A True Story)


    If only you knew the things I went through
    Or the things I never ever got to do
    It isn't easy living my life you know
    As it is hard being Jadeson Bynoe

    Days enough I went to bed frustrated
    So much opportunities lost and timed wasted
    Memories of things of the past in my head
    Of depressing things I wished I could forever forget

    Laughed at, disliked and persecuted for no reason
    Lied on, insulted and sometimes beaten
    Living in a world so full of sin and strife
    These are just some of my hardships in life

    At home, at school and at play
    My life can be a misery in so many ways
    Sometimes defeated, sometimes down
    Some days I can go all day with a frown

    My life you may think is not simple
    But I am not giving up and still functioning and able
    But I found out something that helped me with my life
    And that was Knowing and Believing in Jesus Christ

    He took away my misery and pain
    And showed me in life I had something to gain
    He showed me the way to live my life
    And how to avoid the misery and strife

    So if you think you are down and out
    Go to a Church and you can find out what Jesus Christ is all about
    And I just have one last thing to say
    If he could help me, he could help you also, so Believe in Jesus Christ today.

    Written By Jadeson
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very touching ur pen is speaking deep
     
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    love the emotion that was felt in this poem flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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    No one has walked in your shoes except you, but many can empathize with the painful fit. And you are so right, Jesus is the way. This was uplifting, thank you for this piece.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow powerful message
    We need to all believe
    He we doo for us for real
    Much Love Poet
     
  6. Vision

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    thanks for the comments but it is Jesus above who has anointed me to write poetry and it is His flow He uses through me. The thanks and praises should go to Jesus, and Him who sits on the throne Hallelujah Glory be to God Hallelujah
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Vision.....ur name fits u.
    u really can make people yr vision
    with yr words.
    I felt where u're coming from.
    So,so nice.
     
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    this was very inspirational and uplifting.....Keep doing your thing.
     
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    tru dat the power of his will guides mortal soul
    spiritrually great way of inspiration................
     
  10. cursed heart

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    Excellent poet!:kiss1:
     
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