Black Poetry : "IF ONLY WE ARE PATIENT"

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  1. casper_gyrl

    casper_gyrl New Member MEMBER

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    TONIGHT THOUGH I SIT
    IN SOLITUDE
    MY THOUGHTS ARE
    OFTEN FILLED WITH YOU
    I WONDER AFTER THIS
    INSANITY
    DO FANTASIES COME
    TRUE

    WILL MY WORDS
    COMMUNICATE MY WISHES
    THESE PASSIONATE SLOW
    KISSES
    ANTICIPATED LOVE EMBRACES
    AS MAGICAL AS THIS IS

    EXPLOSIVE NIGHTS OF LOVE
    MAKING
    EACH TIME A DIFFERENT
    LESSON
    THE MOON WILL GUIDE MY
    EVERY STROKE
    I'M BLESSED BY YOUR EXPRESSIONS

    DRAPED IN SWEAT CHEST 2 CHEST
    A CLIMAX 2 OUR FRUSTRATION
    THIS IS THE REWARD THAT WE CAN
    BOTH SHARE
    IF ONLY WE ARE PATIENT.........
     
  2. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Patience IS a virtue... fitting for this virtuous scribe. Nice:spinstar:

    :read:

    :picture:
     
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    yep if only we were patient. love this scribe poet flo on!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    being patient is the key to unlock all
    great write poet
     
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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this some love

    very smooth piece patient is the true key to unlock all
     
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    Luv it sister!:blowkiss: Great things come to those who wait for the right love!:hearts4: :hearts2:
     
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    Some things are worth waiting for, true love is one of them. Welcome to Destee's, and flow some more.
     
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    Hi casper_gyrl
    Welcome to the family
    Our playground :)
    Yes this is a wonderful poem
    It made me think about those moments
    and patient is indeed the key
    Very nice poem. We are all looking forward to reading more


    Peace & Love
     
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    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I day the same that was said by all who read before me


    may we all come to acknowledge the same

    peace

    Patrice
     
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