Quiet Poetry Lounge : If only i could have !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    If only i could have my way
    given the wish i now pray
    to soth in da essence of her sway
    spooling in da rapture dat she lay

    If i only have one chance
    to shower her in true romance
    bring unconditional love
    embrace her worthness from above

    Giveth unto thy spirit
    wit wordz of slumbering lyricz
    obey trustful heart
    be of friendz kinder dayz

    Bath in liquid moments and it's muse
    nothing to refuse between two of us
    tis be brave and nobel as truth
    wide scope beyond sexuality

    If i was given my wish
    surely i'll seal fate with a simple kiss
    cascade affection over life bliss
    not a drop of her cup will my tongue miss

    Utterly hope high across noon
    forth thy image awaken in my room
    as we dance to the indingo tune
    and side by side we lay inside da cocoon

    Wings upspent untold intent
    outlets of my love brisky sent
    to my pathway if only i could
    and yonder all before us deserts

    Vast eternity thy beauty be no more
    if i so then never be found
    nor in thy marble vault be of sound
    yet my echoing swoving song .


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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece made me think of so many "if onlys", and what my life would have been, and maybe, should have been. Such a romantic flair here, sort of melancholy too, anywho, quite a heartfelt flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes watz it makes me loom inside of yesteryears and what if
    comes to mind and play thinking where i could be and what should have been
    there is no end to the memories left behind ......Thankz sis for reading me so well .
    luv ya
     
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    Aw! Beautiful!

    If only you would,
    most certainly you could.
    For the beauty of spirit
    sing songs of sweet rhapsodys
    for e-t-e-r-n-i-t-y long.

    Beautiful Song, Brother Rich!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes thank u purplemoons surely i would if i could and deep and long
    if i just had the chance ........big ups sis
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice and smooth RICH
    very good

    blackluv and bp
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u i'm most humbled ............sista GhettoAmbition
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u welcum Rich
     
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    so kind, so sweet
     
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    :hearts4: :terrific: That was very nice,and inspirational!