Black Poetry : IF ONLY FOREVER (Dedicated to my cousin who is in a coma 8/10/01)

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  1. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Creating yesterday today in my mind ... Taking a short glimpse of what we left behind.

    Rebuilding our childhood and the things we used to do ... The times we lied about being sisters, and when we shared each others shoes.

    This is hurting too bad to write, but I must continue on with this plight. You breathed your last breath of air, long enough to hear the cacophonious screams of another family, not wanting that for this family, you came back ....

    It was a joy to know that you were still here ... But then they said it ... She's Brain ... and then stopped.

    I didn't hear the rest ... I didn't want to hear the rest ... I know that you're still with us ... I know that you still hear me when I'm crying and singing to you ... Don't leave me.

    Then it happened, you started breathing again on your own ... What heart .... What desire .... I only wish it was forever.
     
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    MY HUMBLE HEART GOES OUT TO U

    AS I DROP MY TEARS SLOWLY
    SHOWING I CARE FORTH LIFE
    BE WIT THEE WHOM CAME TO PASS

    PRAYER BE WITH U IN THIS DARKEN HOUR
    I LAY MY FLOWER UPON U WITH GRACE & FAITH
    PRAY MY SISTAH JUST PRAY AS I AM
    SURELY HE HEAR ALL CALLS
    SO SORRY TOO READ SUCH I KNOW ITS HARD
    I TRUELY FEEL YO EMOTIONS INSIDE.................$R

    YA NEED SOMEONE TOO TALK OR LEAN ON
    THEN LEAN ON ME AT [email protected]:(
     
  3. poeticdelight

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    my deepest sympathy..

    would it soothe the pain
    in having my deepest sympathy
    wiping the cares of the world
    away of all its energy

    as death takes course
    with feelings of remorse
    helping the true visionary

    in this i pray
    my deepest sympathy

    pd
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    try

    to think of the good times
    cause the negative energy
    can drown you, meaning
    death or illness is part
    of life, not a very good part
    so think about what you can
    control
    and think about and cherish those good
    thoughts about your cousin
    and let that carry you
    cause you hate for someone you love to be in a situation that you can't help
    it's frustrating
    so keep the love in heart and worry about what you can control and don't be so hard on yourself
    help your cousin by keeping your head up
    and keep writing


    peace and love - Da So'ja gives praise to a cousin

    PEACE
    DSSNY
     
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