Black Poetry : If Only 26 Smiles Were Enough

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Sep 22, 2007.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    am i stranger than fiction

    or too much of a stranger to alleviate her friction

    that i'm a little less innocent than a baby in a manger

    when it comes to re-arranging my diction

    to improve her depiction

    that i'm a guy worth trusting

    it goes without saying that her friendship's easily worth lusting after

    but lately my funnybone's been rusting

    without her silent laughter

    keeping me dry enough to grin

    while i write our Boston Marathon

    with no apparent way to know if i'm running our marathon

    as a friend

    or not



    love,

    howard
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Too bad we don't have a crystal ball so that we could see into the future. Enjoyed this piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da future holds da clues ones we have yet knowledge off but if we did look out !
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks watziname


    thanks $$rich$$
     
  5. MzCream2Sixteen

    MzCream2Sixteen Active Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes we have to just go with the flow and accept the unknown!
     
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    Hello there howard:
    I see you still at it. Flowing it so sweetly.:)


    Much Luv
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes we do :roll:

    thanks mzcream2sixteen :)


    thanks 4everluv :)
     
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