Black Poetry : IF LOVIN U IS WRONG (i don't wanna be right)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    :luv: If lovin u is wrong
    and my heart no longer roam
    coz in u i found a love so true

    then i don't wanna be right !

    if listening to u intently and
    caressin u sweetly is wrong
    and for being ya comfort of
    heart when we start our bliss

    then i don't wanna be right !

    mentally as we embrace
    not to see the trace of face
    yet we are divine one soul
    as we stroll , rock and wave
    lovin like a poetic crave

    then let me be wrong !

    coz unto u i send my love
    to ya heart i protect and caress
    hold u in honor
    hour after hour
    like my beautiful rose flower
    and give u my all
    never let u fall
    wipe ya tears
    cover ya fears

    i don't wanna be right !
    not tonight
    coz i'm love struck :luv:
    i may need :help:
    but u are my :flame: have me hot
    licking my chops :lips: on da spot
    making a milkyway
    to my heart is like an open :book:
    together my heart just be :jumping:
    ova u and not once did u notice
    but lovin u is wrong i don't wanna be right!

    see i found in you my wave
    the bliss i crave and the joy
    u now a mystery and i dare
    not spell it out forth dis love
    is ours alone ur my black pearl
    my purple passion that keep me :hot:
    as we :flirt: and kiss pages i be :spinn:
    and :wave: to yo heart and body
    u shine bright like a :star:
    and :read: me so well like a spell
    of magical bonding i love u :luvv:

    if it's wrong tell me i wanna know !
    as my heart speaks gently
    no need to :bowdown: i am just a man
    seem like u :sleep: on my loveth way
    and how i came to play in the motion
    of two becoming one

    yes the mystery of u
    will leave questions
    and only i so can answer
    yet if lovin u is wrong

    i don't wanna be right not tonight !

    let ya heart taketh up in flyte
    sit beside me and watch the
    galaxy of million orbs seep
    as we cross orbit maze
    my only blazin desires is u
    my inner feelin is u
    i've :blush: a thousand and 1 tymes
    u took my :heart: stole it in daylight
    so tonight i claim it and u let us :toast:
    to our beginning of :new: as i bring
    this sweet affection
    a tender compassion
    and lay u in my humble direction

    if lovin u is wrong
    i don't wanna be right !

    here i place ya name in script

    X_____________________________ ?

    O'my mystery it is
    pt.ll may bring forth da name
    who is she ? :eek:hmy:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the flow...
    full of emotions..
    cant wait for part 2...
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    could not help but smile as i took in each line and the added emotion made me feel love struck 2..this is a nice warm heart loving poem you have compose
    nice indeed
    Peace
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz family
    angel & bluewater
    the best yet to come
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you know you always have me on the edge...
    with your part 1 and 2 writes it always take me
    but this one here was tight...diggin it as always...
    flow on..waiting........................Angel
     
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    this made me smile so big, $$RICH$$. nice the way ya wove ya flow and used the illustrations.
     
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    Nice illustrations....u have me wonderin and ponderin about who this ONE could be..hope pt. II will put an end to the mystery :confused:
     
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    :jawdrop: :jawdrop: DOIN WRONG SOMETIME JUS HAS TO BE RIGHT...MADE ME SMILE
    GOD BLESS :toast:
     
  9. $$RICH$$

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    angel..... indeed sistah the warmth of love is coming out

    gempis ....u know me i had to bring it this was to let her know
    it's time

    chastity.......yes one shall be uncovered name passed and love
    caressed her essence will be known !

    BaduX.........yes true lovin is wrong i can't be right
    sometime we have to be wrong to other but da heart
    is so right.....

    Thanx family for feelin me and the love of she
    to uncover stay tune pt.ll coming soon
     
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    its wrong??? :look: who said that :huh: not me nau-uh lol :look:
     
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