Black Poetry : IF LOVIN U IS WRONG(i don't wanna be right) vision pt.4

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Silently she whisper
    her call made
    da mystery woman
    da love of heart
    is the light

    the whisper spoken
    was ummm so delight
    and now again i write
    from her compassion
    who is she ! ?
    and all this she doing
    to me

    she make me feel all :hot:
    every time she :) and :wave:
    from her poetic emotions she
    have me deep in :luvv:
    her essence caress me with :grouphug:

    yeah ! it's true i need :help:
    but my :heart: knows and feel so :new:
    yes it's :love: love as we :kiss:

    her name lay within da bliss
    so :hot: she set off a :flame:
    have me :spinn: ing and :jumping: ing
    when she sho face i watch and watch
    for ova a month str8 now my passion
    no longer waits
    yeah ya right i might be :nuts: nuts but
    for her is a real :court: i just :blush:
    she is a real :bomb: blowing up in
    rapture and love got me all :smokin:

    we :toast: and be :rolling: with :lol: ter
    :tongue: :kiss: lip :lips: lickin
    her name is ................................?

    O'my :eek:hmy:
    she told me in vow
    she spoken in written wordz
    she been closer watching
    dropping clues
    i dare not break her rule
    she so warm and my :spinstar:
    let ya deep mental mind reveal
    her wholesome of a mystery
    now is she real ?
    can it be u ?
    was it poetry ?
    who is she that holds my heart
    take me to this place of bliss
    her notes been on the walls
    and she call me like a heavens
    and miles apart but closer

    I now end it with the unknown
    mystery of a lover a woman
    a Queen of heart and my feelings

    she know who she is
    and she whisper to me
    to remain a mystery
    but who did the whispering
    was it u or could it be well
    pt.5 will open eyes and
    a voice
    stay tune to hear this voice !
     
  2. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re:to rich

    Great flow
    Please keep writing
    just like this
    Its so good
    great job!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang poet....ummmmmmm part 5???????
    you oh my... :court:
    but this was tight....
    likes it as always....Angel
     
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    what a tease you are:laugh:
    i am loving all this richness
    mmmm
    now who :)
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Alpha Male.........big thankz as this mystery unfolds

    Angel ....the twist affects of 5 and final blow as i truely unmask
    the hidden beauty of love i am crazy about

    bluewater .....sistah the hidden secret is leaking fast 5 will reveal
    it all the final piece to a mystery

    Thanks all for da read and love & support here
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother $$, U got me like a woman constantly starin' at the soaps, caught up in the suspense.

    Bring it, brother, this is dope.
     
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    indeed brutha 5 will be the final piece to a mystery
    and she will be known to all ....wooooweeee!
    i tell ya !
     
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    i wanna play.....

    Ok ok I love a good mystery
    So lets see whose the mystery of thee…

    Hmmmmmmm…

    Ummmmm

    Well we know she stands tall
    And her loves shine as
    her scribes reach within thee….
    Caressin thee and loving thee….
    Sendin thee in:hot:and got ya:jumping:
    da mental falls and u get all :nuts:y
    and yes u need :help:
    but the :luvv: flows and ur deep dat I can
    see but u un-blanket this love
    and woke it from its :sleep:…..
    so lets see…..she a voice of reason…
    so :hot: she set off a :flame:
    have u :spinn: ing and :cry: ing
    who have received a award of honor
    from our happy home..now she have
    another goal……
    u been watchin how long? hmmmmmm
    Her protector
    Her King
    And she is ur
    Black pearl of essence your
    Purple passion..
    The Queen of thee…as she shines like a :star:
    In ur eyes…..i wonder is it ummm________
    Or is it ___________but see she knows
    who she is….but afraid of the rapture
    of thee Royal RICHNESS…. :bowdown:
    So ya get crazy when she smiles
    And u :lips: do ya :grin: acts ya need a :spank:in
    :laugh: .......anyways.....

    Miles away but yet you have seen her
    Face know her essences but she not yours……
    glance by chance..as she covers her
    face of shyness :blush:ing
    I see….she :read: u like a :book:
    U feel her like a bliss of fire
    emotions din raptured and ya been captured....
    Which sends ya a blaze……shes da :bomb:
    send you thru waves as she releases
    her love unto u… ya mental is on float

    :luv: stuck u are… and yes I still think u need :help:
    :laugh:

    she is ya blazin desire with sweet affection
    and tender compassion and she lays humbly
    in your direction……as u and her cross da floor
    in scribes…..often...

    1 didn’t bring a name
    just a puzzle
    2 didn’t do nothing
    3 gave clues and
    4 is twisted..you mastered this I do say
    for it states you been watchin ova
    a month time
    when 3 indicates longer hmmmmmm
    but then we have the
    5 week and 5 days going on
    which throws a loop….
    Then she wants to stay
    A mystery as she spoke upon you
    In a hush…but been placin clues on da wall
    As she watch closer da mystery of thee
    just have to wait unto it unfold…in pt 5

    wheeeeeeeeeewwwwwww...... :fight: dang poet!!!!!!!!

    so i guess it looks like i need :help: too...lol

    do ya thang….as I can see
    Your loyal to who u are and who u r to be
    A true POET mastering a mystery… :yo:
    Wooooweeee…lol..Angel
     
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    it will all be uncovered tonight .....wow !
     
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    well i hope so or i got to do all that again.
    .with all them clues... :nuts:
     
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