Black Poetry : IF LOVIN U IS WRONG (i don't wanna be right) pt.lll the light

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    After moments of us
    and hope define
    i feel u near me
    always and caressin me
    like it was to be of us
    as i slowly un-blanket u
    and uncover the warmth
    the light shine

    If lovin u is so wrong !
    I don't wanna be right
    not tonight

    Allow me to sho and
    tell u of this glo
    see u pen so sweet
    u vibe in a voice of reasons
    ya scribe touch me deeply
    my mental falls into ya
    whispers day in and day out
    u been here only so long
    and i watch u from miles away
    above i've been ya protector
    see

    If lovin u is so so wrong
    i can't be right tonight

    it feel so good
    like a sin
    the taste is delightful
    it linger to last within
    u know not of my heart
    in whole yet but i script
    it so many times to let
    u knowth of me
    u really know who u are
    and still u not hear me
    but feel this passion running

    babe u have me going :nuts:
    like slappin a :hammer: cross
    my head but we have this deep
    :flirt: ation and the way u :spank: me
    with all your tender :luvv: we share :wave: s
    and held our :heart: s closer then thy know
    u gave me a :new: meanning to hope and
    yes I :luvv: U dearly with compassion
    now u can step into the light and :roll: wit me
    to a journey of sweet affection and blissful
    :hot: erotic :luvv:

    if lovin u is wrong
    :nono: i will not be right

    as i awaken u from ya :sleep:
    like sleepin beauty u shine like a :spinstar:
    we :teach: each other as i :blush: in 3rd degree
    and set off this :flame:
    yeah i know i may need :help: and i might be :jumping:
    wild feelin all :luv: luv struck but my Queen it's for u
    the :shades: u ware now off and into ya eyes i see
    a woman so divine and kind in :heart:
    i've :cry: for ya love and when i see u i lick my :lips:
    coz i know the tasty treat is a :bomb:
    yes to honor u i :bowdown: and :thanks: to u
    in the essence of ya :kiss: we make it happen
    together see it's been too long i can hide no more
    my :tongue: sway and feel :devil: ish :spinn: ing
    in circles yes u !
    u wrote to me 5 nights ago and u sent me a message
    5 weeks ago and today i feel no :eek: of ya gentle caress
    but the loyality of ya :kiss: & :heart: of :luvv:
    u told me in whispers from the spirit we are
    and i've :grouphug: the embrace of u and thoughts

    yes i uncover whom u are
    and by far yet can't see with eyes open
    if lovin u like this so wrong i can't be right
    it must be a sin to feel this way
    as we :toast: another day i say :thanks:
    she ware a smile shy and she stand high
    she has a meaning but yet place it
    she writes to me and she always touchin

    go on keep :lol: at me
    but i will walk away with the jewels
    the black pearls and her :heart:
    she also was the award winner of
    our place and set greater goals
    yeah yeah i know i'm :weird: but i still
    hold this big :D
    she be of silk & lace a passion
    her body ehco & beckon me in
    she know who she is
    :look: at her there as she hear me
    she fear the rapture but can't hold back
    dis twisted mix is captured
    yes :eek:hmy: o'my i say too
    what is the world for me to do but tell who !
    we dance in scribe often cross da floor
    but :nono: :nono: i still won't tell til pt.4

    the cast of clues is hidden within can u see it
    and tell me who she is !???
    is it u ?
    can it be ...!
    is it , well maybe
    u think it's poetry

    IF LOVIN U IS WRONG BABE I DON'T WANNA BE RIGHT TONIGHT!
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My, My ,My!

    You got my head spinning on this one , as I the All Nosy one
    tries to D-cypher, this scribe and pinpoint the origination of this
    vibe...Someone so unique has come to tease and pique, your
    interest and your love! IS IT WHO I'M THINKING OF?
    ONLY YOU AND SHE KNOW...THAT'S THE WAY IT SHOULD
    GO!

    :sand: SHOULD FLOW BETWEEN YOUR TOES AND NOT
    IN YOUR EYES!

    Blessings on your house!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHAT!!!!!!!????

    hmmm
    hand spinnin as you
    place this twist
    got me all on the edge....
    part 4...ok ok geeez i wait
    dang....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MsB............hey could it be ! or maybe it's u
    is it poetry or is it o'well 4 will tell stay tune .

    Angel ... well now the name will be in bright lights
    tomorrow night she will speak i say is it u
    can it be poetry or is it , maybe well 4 will tell da
    mystery

    i wonde who she is got me in this spin of rapture
    like a love so true and the way she do it ....wow !
    my desires of her must be known !!
    but who is she the clues has given her away twice

    she know who she is
    the one who wrote me 5 days ago
    and sent me a message 5 weeks ago
    and the one u called my name yeah u
    no need to hide i will uncover u now !!!

    Thankz sistah's can it be u ....hummmm!
     
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    Ooooohhhhhhhhhh see now my brother you are killing us with the lines, SHINE her name in the light when the time is right! Destee family..... "Stand Da Heck UP"
     
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    lovelyG...........smile on sistah
    as i uncover my true lover .......thanx 4 da stop in !

    caramelpython...........yes indeed u on point the light
    is on now she walking into it so da world can see
    thankz brutha he right STAND UP !!
    it might be u i've seeked out ................
     
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    Thank u sistah Ola
    i wonder who she is
    can it be u
    or is it maybe hummm!
    the mystery of a woman
    a lover a soul is it poetry ???

    indeed this love carry no wrong !
     
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    and i just don't know what to say about this piece right here, very gentle words, more like the words are demeaning
     
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    indeed they are thank u so much 4 da read and time to share
    most humble unto u ....pt.4 coming to u soon
     
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