Black Poetry : IF LOVIN U IS WRONG (her great power) pt. II

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    If lovin u is wrong
    i don't wanna be right
    coz u bring me this joy
    make me feel da love
    not a toy
    so lovin u is right
    as i swoosh in flyte

    see u gave me something
    from the start
    loved me for me
    as i watch u so many times
    and felt the scribe u vibe
    u caressed me deeply
    and made me feel ya heart
    u took my love then from start
    but u never knew

    the mystery of u i now must
    sho and the goddess of ya glo
    see u took my hand
    u embraced me
    told me u love me
    and always will be
    so tonight i write the unspoken
    and from the orbs of ya soul
    the inner beauty u pose is a
    true gem of a rose i place here
    ya name
    but u know who u are
    all the bright wonders of u
    and the love so true
    a heart of womanly bond
    if lovin u is wrong babe !

    i can't be right not tonight
    the feelin u give feel so good
    it must be a sin
    the rapture of taste u leave
    as we kiss
    hand n' hand
    must be a sin
    how u hug me with wordz
    and make love to me in
    the silent secret place
    feel so good
    it gotta be a sin

    if lovin u is so wrong
    do i need to be right ?

    this great power u pose
    ova me that makes me
    wanna say ummmmmm!!
    and heart run fast
    i light up when i see u
    and i feel u when u touch
    the pad it's like a explosion
    a charge to my soul this
    great power u pose ya love is kind
    so gentle i unwined the warmness
    u bring make my heart sing in sweet
    rapture like jazz roaming the air

    so tonight my love speaks out to u
    hope u hear me in time before
    day light and know my :wave:
    is how i :read: u and :luvv: u
    u showered me in yo essence
    and :new: ly washed my sins
    ur :heart: make me go :nuts:
    ur the :bomb: we never :argue:
    nor :fight: just be :flirt: :toast: ing
    and i be so :hot: i may need :help:
    but tonight i give :thanks: 2 u 4 u
    and still i'm :luv: love struck by ya
    sway and the dip of ya :flame:
    keep my head :spinn: with big :) s
    how we :grouphug: and :kiss: without
    touching i taste ya :lips: bite my :tongue:
    :blush: and feel so :devil: ish it's :luvv:

    I am :new: to ya power but a :spinstar: of :heart:
    ya my sweet sweet :fairy:
    i never get :confused: nor :mad: when u around
    just full of this sinful joy fulfilling my :heart:

    I :cry: in the name of :luvv:
    :jumping: for joy when u touch me
    u know who u are but not what u do
    so i leave the mystery for part 3 ......

    :nono: :nono: i can't tell but i can say :thanks:
    and i :bowdown: to u my nubian goddess yes :love: it's love

    stay tune she walks in the light and sho self in three
    who is she ????????????
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the emotions up in here wow...
    got me all on edge
    and still got to wait
    for a name..but this was indeed
    of the hook...but geeeezzzzzz
    name?????????
     
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    thankz Ola indeed sistah
    da sweetness of mystery is da beauty
    she will sho self coz i see her ......

    awwweee...angel the wait is da beauty
    the question remain WHO IS SHE ??
    the mystery of a love she here somewhere
    and don't know it's her but soon it will walk
    out into the light
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :D:D:D this is beautiful...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That wonderful poetic imagery does point in a certain direction...Well, we will wait and see.....
     
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    my goodness
    woo woo woo
    head swirling
    woo woo woo
    yeah :)
    very nice
    bringing a smile
    Peace
     
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    thankz LovelyG ....who is this mystery woman ???
    can it be U
    can it be poetry
    is it ummmm! maybe ....who is she ?

    watzinaname....indeed it points in the direction of
    but is it really ! hummm
    is it poetry
    can it be u
    who is she ???

    bluewater .........woo woo woo is right
    who is this Queen of delight
    is it u
    can it be
    can it be poetry
    who is this mystery woman ??

    Thankz all as i uncover her did anyone see the clues in pt.ll
    in order to see them u must read one !
     
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    Rich my brother you never cease to amaze me with your post! You do it man and you do it well, such passion and drive you have left in this post, I feel you my brother!
     
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    thanks brutha caramelphython indeed and 3 will open eyes
     
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    revisit of the lovin u series
     
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