Black Poetry : IF LOVIN U IS WRONG ! da final chapter 5

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    As the long wait is ova
    she now to be known
    from the beauty to the
    wonderment of grace
    as pt. 5 take place
    tracing da essence of her
    again tonight after flyte
    i now place her name ....

    sitting here thinking
    of all we done together
    for ova a month the love
    and how it was given life
    crossing waves kissin
    pages and sharing she
    took my heart just stolen
    from da body i've watched
    i heard her near me calling
    and seen her face & smile
    and now it's forever within
    as the end of a mystery !!

    finally i uncover the mask
    of she and a mystery and
    place her in reality of my
    world above with sweet
    rapture .....this time no
    need to express so forth
    she already knowth of me
    this Queen has written to me
    again & again
    like a rapture of unknown
    she have gave me many
    words :nono: she not poetry
    as i reveal da one she weep
    as i write and vanish
    like a loaded :bomb: now from
    da :heart: and the :luvv: i be :jumping:
    in a rapture and bring forth life

    sure i maybe :nuts: and need :help:
    but in my mind i am just fine and know
    to say :thanks: unto the one i held
    so close and now her name leaks to
    canvas but she now gone forever and
    whispered to me I :luvv: U and :kiss:
    me goodbye still :luv: love struck and
    in a maze of her
    WHO is she u ask poetically
    if i can ever stop :spin: ing and turning in :spinn:
    from this :flirt: ing feelings

    well now to share the light
    HER NAME IS .......mental vision
    the Queen i created in my mind and
    made her the best a man can ever wish for
    yeah u all been fooled on this one
    sure u thought it was ?
    and felt it could be ?
    but it was the visional mystery of thee
    my MIND caressing a vision i made
    now the story is laid as she vanish
    but still leave a spark of a shinning :spinstar:
    i may be crazy but i was in :luvv: LOVE
    now all i can do is ............... :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

    as eveyone jaw drops :jawdrop:

    unto u peace poetically
    Da mental mind & vision :toast:
     
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    this was good....

    yes u need :help:YES
    but i enjoyed this so much
    b/c ya had me thinkin...
    who is she...thee man
    in flight my mate in poetry
    then got caught..lol :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
    but ummmm :driveby: :yo:
    yo wild yes indeed.... :laugh:
     
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    help me then !!!!!
    lol
    coz she done vanish and gone now
    thank u for reading the twisted wild myster of
    (IF LOVIN U IS WRONG i don't wanna be right)
    peace
     
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    :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
    i help ya!!!!!! :court: how that feel
     
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    smash me ! wack me !

    it tickles
    ain't i a stinker :lol: :lol: :lol:
    need to hit harder den dat
     
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    stop running i wack ya hard..... :hammer:
    :spank: ya too...you is off it stop....:laugh:
     
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    cluck me ! and the red spot u hitting is
    da love bug lighting up !!!
    let me stand still now spank me ......lol
     
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    :D :D :D :D :luvv: :luvv:
    THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL....
    LUVIN THIS... DO THE [email protected] THANG....
    GOD BLESS :wave:
     
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    That was

    beautiful i tell ya just beauty in the rarest form it was um umm good yup

    u guys are soo sill just funny

    G-soul
     
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