Black Poetry : If it all could be so simple

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  1. Phenessy

    Phenessy Member MEMBER

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    if it all could be so simple
    i would reverse the mental
    impliment my conditions
    with other's intentions
    or should i
    take my own breath
    prosper in wealth
    my choice to voice
    any indiscretions
    i beckon within
    to begin
    a new day
    a new year
    without fear
    to be heard
    not all food
    is good to eat
    some drums
    are meant to beat
    as i tap into ya senses
    believe it is I
    risen from the ashes
    overshadowin masses
    as i relate in away
    not to be outweighed
    by the handle of
    masterful deception
    hear me now
    if it all could be so simple
    it would never be difficult

    Phenessy
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: welcome to destee...
    enjoyed your flow....
    hope to read more....
    and welcome again...Angel
     
  3. Phenessy

    Phenessy Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the warm welcome!!
    :wave:

    Phenessy
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome

    welcome to destee.com postic playground
    welcome to the new home u found within
    upon family and friendz u kin now welcome
    as i pass some love from above i feel ya scribe u vibe poet.
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, I really liked the way you posed this...I guess nobody promised us it would be easy.
     
  6. Phenessy

    Phenessy Member MEMBER

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    Thanks $Rich$
    Thanks Watzinaname
    if it all could be so simple..
    takin anotha chance
    at love..life..

    Phenessy
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME!WELCOME! TO DESTEE

    NICE DROP! AND WELCOME TO DESTEE... LOVE THE SENTIMENT EXPRESSED HERE!
    "IF ONLY THINGS WERE SO SIMPLE..."BUT CHALLENGES COME TO MAKE YOU STRONG!?
    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE! :smokin: :smokin: :smokin:
     
  8. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow! Phenessy, this is a helluva way to introduce yourself. Welcome! :wave: I love poems like this, that use simple language arranged in a way to be profoundly deep. Lookin forward to reading more of your flows.
     
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    can it be that it was all so simple then...
    way back when
    the light off your soul
    made my face grin...
    tyte scribe
    one love
    khasm
     
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