Black Poetry : If it Ain't Love........

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  1. soulful

    soulful Member MEMBER

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    If it ain’t love
    Than what is it?
    I mean I sweat
    I tremble
    I stutter
    I ain’t ashamed
    But I am confused
    Cause I think I’m in love
    With you.
    But what if I’m not
    And we embark on this journey
    Where will that leave you and me
    If it ain’t love?
    I mean what if it’s lust
    Between us?
    What if the passionate kiss,
    And the long hugs
    Have nothing to do with our love?
    I mean your body is banging like that!
    From your perfectly shaped breasts,
    To the round mound you holding in the back.
    But is that all I see?
    If you are that sweet flower full of nectar,
    Does that make me the bumble bee?
    I mean I don’t think so,
    I mean you sending a brotha
    I love you too vibes,
    But I’m just hoping it’s not
    A lustful illusion.
    And the butterflies in my stomach
    Are caused by the falling in love confusion.
    I guess I’m a little afraid.
    That your feel won’t be mine.
    And that the time that we are spending
    Will be wasted.
    But forgive me sweetheart, cause this love thing
    My lips have never tasted.
    So if it isn’t love,
    Than let’s just wait and see,
    I mean I think I love you now,
    And hopefully soon you will love me…
     
  2. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smoov way to put it.
    i'm diggin'
     
  3. tbone5769

    tbone5769 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    questions

    **** seems like I asked my self those questions before, must be universal. But hey at least you asked!

    Nice flow

    One
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yeap!

    i've been there wit da same wonderment
    i see u asked anyway .........i feel ya nice flow!
     
  5. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im feelin

    The way you puttin it down! You know there's a thin line between love & lust...

    Respect
    Reas
     
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    jelli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *snappin* *snappin* whistling clapping....
    Nice flow....
     
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    Soulful.....

    Likin the way you laid this out
    pondering the early stages of love
    .......or lust.....nice flo!

    Epiphany:heart:
     
  8. soulful

    soulful Member MEMBER

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    sometimes its lust

    sometimes its lust that I feel, but somtimes lust is what I wanna feel....you feel me?
    lol
    thanks for the read peeps!
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Soulful,

    I'm feelin this. I also like your suggestion to wait and see.....that is one way we can find the answer. Often we don't wait....then we have wasted time. I really enjoyed the read. Thanks

    Madd Holiday Greetings :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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