Quiet Poetry Lounge : "IF I"

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    If i
    gave you my heart , what would u do
    If i
    open my soul , will u be true
    If i
    made a mistake will u be blue
    If i
    offered my love will u see it through
    If i
    whisper my affection , will it be your direction
    If i
    desire will you tame this fire
    If i
    say yes will you confess
    If i
    tell you beauty can you caress
    If i
    lay compassion & compromises can u accept
    If i
    Only Knew what u would do
    If i

    :uhh: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not knowing the future for sure
    makes it difficult to see clearly
    to show how one truly feels
    to the one you love dearly,
    but...
    I would cherish your soul
    and your heart true
    Mistakes may happen, but
    love will always shine through
    I would return your affection
    and cool the flame of that fire
    If you can say yes to confession, I can
    caress the beauty that will transpire
    If you will give compromises
    and your compassion
    I will give you the same in return
    in a manner that only I can fashion
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If you gave me your heart…and open your soul
    I will never judge you… but be your rail when you fall
    …To help you back up be your strength…bring you up when you’re down
    Love you for who you are…make you happy put a smile on your face
    Hold your heart
    Treat it with care and share my love with only you
    Offer your love
    I submit mine to you with my heart and soul
    Like kin we would be best friends
    You can be my boo as I say I love you baby
    My direction would make us perfection
    Tame your desire with my fire as we make a flame
    To a everlasting love…
    I say yes as I confess
    Only if you knew…now you know
    What if I gave you my love
    Loved you the way you needed
    Spoiled you and took care of you
    What’s your confession
    Compassion ally
    I wait upon this stone

    As my wings take full bloom
    To call you my own
     
  4. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dayum, yawl...Gone and set this thread on fire, would ya?....Straight fire from the cool brotha Rich, that cool Sista Watz, and my cool Blk Angel...


    Peace!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    watz.............
    if i , will u really
    cherish it all truely
    and if i
    will you in return
    caress what my heart
    yearn & burn
    if i and never let go
    so we can forever hold
    i wanna know if i will u
    don't lie tell me the truth!
    thank u for the flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Angel...................
    If i gave it to u
    will u cherish it like new
    and just if i deep
    in my soul will you
    treat it as gold
    and compromise me
    yours so we can drift
    if i , will it be
    everlasting of we
    would u guide my spirit
    and lift me to sing
    hold me up if i should fall
    always ready for my call
    if i
    will you really , bring warmth
    and comfort within tell me
    ya dear and the one to mend
    if i
    really wanna know so i know
    da true score as we go deep
    to da core if i ........Thankz wow! rock my world


    BigDrizzle big ups as i work the if i as i fly
    to see really why thankz brutha for the visit.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if i could hold ya just for night
    would you promise to be there always or would you take flight
    from what we use to share
    i thought you cared my original windy city
    see i'm just going to leave this alone
    since you replace me with someonelse at your home
    but if i could feel your words just one more time
    i would give up my last dimes
    to keep ya forever down with me
    miss the way you made me complete
    i still have love for you
    for i found someone to be my boo
    he throw a little fuss and a little tantrum
    you saw how he gave you a little sample
    but then again they always come back
    to reclaim what theres
    the real point right now is If you.........
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Nevar
    Thank you and do your do
    but nobody can replace u
    if i
    allow you one night
    can you make it right
    if i
    give and share
    will you forever care
    if i
    say come right in
    if i
    will u compromise
     
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    oooh! let me get some of this one too. hahaha

    If you gave me your heart
    I would savor its taste on my tongue
    If you opened your soul
    I would wear it like full link mink down to my toes
    If you made a mistake and it made me blue
    I would cry in your arms and be willing to start over new
    If you offered your love
    I'd share mines with you
    If you whispered your affection
    I'd baste in that too
    If you disired, I would relinguish my fire
    together we're blaze, pure passion inspired
    If you told me of beauty
    I would blossom like a flower
    If you laid down compassion and compromise
    I would relish every hour
    If only I knew what you wanted to do
    If only I knew...
    IF... only... I... knew...


    Beautiful scribe poet!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Purplemoons
    If i
    say yes and confess
    will u cover and caress
    If i
    sho you my love and devotion
    will you hold me in slow motion
    If i
    accept all you say
    will you forever stay
    if i open at tell you all
    like mink and unique
    if i
    can we be close
    make warmth our gentle
    choice and learn the means
    of hearts as one
    if i
    only knew what u seek
    and the love u pose so sweet
    if i
    only knew the truth !

    Thank u sista ...wow