Black Poetry : If I Were....

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  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    if i were the ocean and you were the sand
    time would rearrange itself in making plans

    if i were the motion and you were the sea
    these tears i cry'll bring you back to me

    if i were the songtress and you were the band
    these words i wrote would make you stand

    if i were honey and you were a tree
    like a bumblebee you'd follow me

    if i were the wrist and you were the hand
    these words i wrote wouldn't mean a ****

    if i were the lips and you were the tongue
    without its help all i can do is hum

    if i were the eyes and you were my ears
    these words i sigh would soothe your fears

    if i were the sun and you were the moon
    then i would slide down the silver spoon

    if i were the mountains and you were the peak
    i'd fall silently fast asleep as you sweep me off my
    feet

    my darling my sweet







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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ummmmm!! PD

    if i was da wind of many faces
    u would trace me in ya bliss
    single out my simple kiss

    if i was the song u sing
    then in u my name will ring

    if u was all above
    surely i give my love

    if i could u know i would
    if i was light i'll shine on u
    if i was tha caress
    i'll be comforting ya breast
    if i could feel what u feel
    in tyme our minds mend
    and surely we'll be fine
    if i :heart: :kiss:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so beautiful. I truly enjoyed the read.

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feeling you on this poet.
    real tyte.
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :toast: to you queen

    peace..

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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PeeDidDee.


    Simple&Sweet...

    (just like love's supposed to be)

    :)

    AlwaysPeace.
    SunShyne~
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    'sup :wink:
     
  8. poeticdelight

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    lovedided it

    the art
    the talent
    the poet

    DSSNY
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is top notch scribin baby gurl! Lovin it!

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