Black Poetry : If I were

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  1. Nappy_thoughts

    Nappy_thoughts Member MEMBER

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    If I were the moon
    Id dance
    a thousand stars
    and consume the light of spaces black hole
    M-e-r-c-u-r-y my way
    Back to S-a-t-u-r-n
    If I were the clouds
    I'd rain on a thousand
    dry lands
    find a thirsty soul
    and offer them a drink
    If I were love
    I'd mother every emotion
    and fill the V-o-i-d in every heart
    If I were time
    I would stand still so that I'm careful
    to take in all that is around me
    not missing one s-e-c-o-n-d -
    M-i-n-u-t-e or H-o-u-r
    If I were life
    I would make sure that I was given
    to the dead
    to the hopeless and to the lost
    If I were Peace
    I would find a place were there is war
    To build my place of refuge
    If I were……
    If I were………………..
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nappy, this piece is quite nyce. i'm lovin' it! keep on scribin'...it's tyght.

    ~~~inkdrops~~~
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I were....

    If you were..If we were....Nice thoughts written down on paper. I like that...Never thought about it...kind makes me think...If I were. :p
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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