Black Poetry : If I was Free!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Jul 2, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Freedom doesn't mean to do as I
    please. It is a presence of
    mind that allows my thoughts to
    run unabated. I grow with each
    breath into the man I am
    destined to become. I feel the
    power of each cell within me
    reaching potential. Thirsty for
    the next moment in time. If I was
    free. Man said he gave me freedom,
    he is wrong. It isn't his to give.
    Nullify. It is mine from birth with
    the first breath I took. Understand
    this, one can't live in which injury
    to the least isn't recognized as damage
    to the whole. So put me down, let me
    go. You will suffer more. If you were
    free..you wouldn't say in your mind
    that it isn't so. I am free!


    (c) HODEE...
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am feeling the wisdom in your flow, the strenght coming from with in...this is a marvelous read..thank you for sharing
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome from above as i pass down da love
    welcome to the family of bond
    dis scribe is tyte as i take my flyte
    continue ya flow so da world can know
    ahhh! yes :) :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  4. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your flow is deep...I like it. Welcome to Destee!
     
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