Black Poetry : If I refuse to accept a women’s power

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To me that is the issue.
    With it I do not agree.

    Why would my darling.
    Not want to have sex with me?

    The man, who is always with her and comes correct,

    Is it something she should explain?
    Is it something she should never do?
    Is it something never to be understood?
    Is it something she can’t control?
    Just has to be
    Or just the way it is?

    Down right hard to accept.
    I see it more clearly now!

    When I got into a long term relationship
    The curtain came up and it was her.

    She stood there like
    I hoped to never see her

    I saw my girl
    She was now center stage acting out
    I was denied in her sexual world.

    It’s not like this is something of a surprise
    I heard about this thing
    It seems to happen after courting
    When you provide in the relationship a ring

    I recall when we became a thing

    My only request when we met
    Was not to go to bed angry
    Or ever deny each other sex.

    I rushed into the house one day.
    With enthusiasm on my face
    I am the provider the bread winner
    I do all the good I can

    I was so glad
    I secured a job that doubles my pay
    But it is in another state

    I can understand
    Her concerns in this
    Uprooting all she knows

    It wouldn’t be a great big deal
    But with any thing I do she doesn’t approve

    It has to always be her way.
    Or the house has no happy home

    I would abandon her
    Leave, been gone long ago
    But I am not that sort of man

    I do know now there is no love,
    No conversation no approval in fact
    Of anything I do as a man

    It’s true

    What is a Man to do?
    :10500: CHEAT!
    How did relations come to this?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling you on this ......sometime a man gotta do what he gotta do to please oneself
     
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    lilpea Moderator STAFF

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    Brother....Brother.... Brother... Like brother Rich, I too feel you on this...But i must admit Cheating ain't the way to go...After tiring to talk things through. If nothing can be resolved it's time to book...I mean get my hat and leave...personally I couldn't live my life looking over my shoulders when with another woman. Its not fair to me or that other woman. Plus I just like the feeling of knowing I have nothing to hide. So I must say NO cheating is not the answer.

    But I do like your poem.

    Lilpea...:1on1:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A woman got have it...
    She don't like standing on shaky ground ~
     
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    i really hope this is not happening 2 u cuz i no it happens but if it is my man tell what u think,what u feel n let her explain her self
    dont cheat naah especially if u not da type 2
    some ppl will just 2 get bak at her
    maybe she is cheatin on u only when she is gettin it somewhere else
    that she wont try 2 get at home.
    she interest in da relationship cuz mr new thing but mr new thing might not
    b mr right 4 her.10 outta a 100,000 he is wrong 4 her
    if that is so let her go many fish in da sea

    now in da bible it says when two a married the man body belongs 2 his wife and the woman body belongs to the man so she is goin against Gods words.

    dont keep it inside my man.neva do that i no what im talkin abt believe me is da type a ish 2 break up a happy home hope aint got kids if u do then think of da kids n make a harsh direct decision cuz da home threatened(is it da rite spellin)lol.

    1 luv.




     
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    Corvo navigator of live MEMBER

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    Great poem!

    Been there brother,
    With out that touch of love and affection, there seems no point in staying.

    Good luck with what you decide.
     
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