Quiet Poetry Lounge : If I Kissed You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulful2006, Jul 11, 2006.

  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I kissed you
    That night under the tree
    would you and me be
    more than just the friends we are
    if I let you in my passion dome
    would you still want to take me
    Home to meet your moms
    and the family and all
    or would it just be a lost cause
    One moment in time where we took a pause
    For the cause of
    beatin it up and heatin it up
    would you hold my hand in public places
    Look and laugh at your ex girls that make faces
    Or would I just be another notch in your belt
    Nothin more than a d*** blow dealt
    by the hands of time
    Taken in by my hands
    was this your plan
    I need to know so
    tell me what it is
    would it matter then
    that I let you in tonight
    is it love or just passion that you waited on
    Just let me know
    So this poem can continue on.............
     
  2. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so this poem can continue on.....
    that was so sweet soul
    waiting on love's kiss
    so that in later days
    you can sit and reminense
    of two lips at play
    in the splendor of bliss

    snaps, snaps poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow....this was felt and speaks from da heart
    i hear ya sis................................................
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    soulful:
    This is really beautiful. flo on poet
     
  5. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for the love and support Im just ryig to grow with ym skill and become more real as I go along.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so this poem can continue on
    as the plot is getting strong

    you go gurl do ya thang poet.
     
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