Black Poetry : If I Hada Known

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  1. j2das05nc

    j2das05nc Member MEMBER

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    If I hada known what would go down,
    If I hada known the things I would go threw,
    If I hada known all the love that would be lost,
    If I hada known the times wasted on you;

    If I hada known how much this would hurt
    If I hada known it was going to be a while
    If I hada known my love you'd throw away
    If I hada known this pain hid by a smile

    If I hada known how hard it is to remember,
    If I hada known how quickly away would turn you,
    If I hada known how much people can change,
    If I hada known all the hurt I'd go threw;

    If I hada known I'd be writing this,
    I would have still loved you.

    -J2daS05NC
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Flow!!!!!!!
    So honest
    So sincere
    Like how you put the emotions out there
    Keep it flowin'



    Oh yeah




    WELCOME TO DESTEE!!!!!!
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelin all the emotion flowin here
    well done welcome to destee.com
    poetic playground
    welcome to the new home u found
    lovin ya flava
     
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    MUCH LOVE & THANKS FOR THE WARM WELCOME!!!



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    "Live for today because
    yesterday is gone and
    tomorrow may never come."



    -J2daS05NC of Destee
     
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    nice flow
    welcome again
    to destee.com
    flow on
    Peace
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    j2das05nc Member MEMBER

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    That's the truest you can find
    If you knew what was going to go down
    And still been down


    Peace & Luv

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    Yes, to know all that and still want to be in a relationship, then you love that person inside out. Great piece here.
     
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    smh

    I find myself sayin the same thing....smh
    Thanks for this one
    Nita
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    hi:wave: and welcome
    very nice drop
    wonderful flow
    feeling you on this
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    If I hada known the meaning of love...I would have enbraced it more.
    If I hada known the scars that pain leaves...I would not have entered the world.
    If I hada known that I can't go back to 'yesterday'...I would have lived it to the fullest.
    If I hada known that those words really hurt you...I would never had said it.
    and if....
    WE ALL HADA KNOWN THE INPORTANCE OF 'UNITY'... THIS WOULD BE A BETTER WORLD.

    but...you didn't know, I didn't know...and sometimes we just don't know what we don't know !!!!

    this was/is a beautiful piece and I couldn't wait to :jumping: in and add my 2-cent.
    thank-you for sharing...
     
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