Black Poetry : If I Had One Wish...

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  1. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    straight to my heart!!!

    Wow! that was one incredible piece...when I read it I just felt such sincerity and love coming across...wow...all a sista can say right now..I espacially love the part when you say;

    "..I wish that I could kiss you one time from the inside out and make all your pain go away.." wow...

    lo'
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a wishful love to one ........indeed wishies come true
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I had one wish
    I'd wish to be filled
    with the exalting love
    you possess.
    to experence the real
    "Reason"
    to be splashed in the
    sincerity of you.
    I'd wish to run amorously
    in your imagination to create
    memories that seem a reality.
    I'd wish us one romantic night
    that would last an eternity.
    to drown in the depths
    of your peacefull soul
    only to be resurrected
    in your sweet spirit.
    I'd wish to share in the highs
    and lows of you,
    to live life with you in any
    way, shape or form.
    to forever be your friend
    that's what I'd wish for.


    Thanks for giving us another beautiful
    peace of Reas. :wink:


    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *bowing*
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ohhhhh weee snot noze

    this is absolutely delicious. Loved it the third go round





    One
     
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    Awwww Reas,
    This is sweet..
    you know, wishes do come true.
    its good to see you on the board...once again..:heart:

    Epiphany :heart:
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    reas.


    has anyone eva told you that you as smoove as
    a rain-slick gawja road? ..how 'bout as smoove
    as a baby's ***? :lol: anyway!! you smoove!! :lol:
    believe dat!! & i love-did this heah!!

    you been holdin' out on me. 'cho raggedy ***! :tongue:

    itsallLove, chile!

    elayne.
     
  9. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reas,

    Man, you on point with this joint...

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reason and Coco, I am wishing with both of you but for my very own wish to come true, but you both wished the wishes in words for me. Thank you.
     
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