Black Poetry : If I Had My May

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  1. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I had my way, I’d have you
    There’d be no more delay
    Urges inside my are growing
    Urges I’m eager to convey
    Fantasies make me the predator
    Attraction makes you the prey
    With earnest haste I’d catch you
    If I could… If I had my way

    If I had my way, I’d have you
    Make your doubts turn hazy and grey
    Revealing desires you have for me
    Put them clear and on display
    I’d no longer worry about tomorrow
    For you’d be all mine today
    Then, I’d learn the things you delight in
    If I could… If I had my way

    If I had my way, I’d have you
    Kissing you in a passionate way
    Telling you the places I’d like to touch
    And you telling me it’s okay
    Letting you offer direction
    And doing my best to obey
    Better than all you can imagine
    If I could…If I had my way

    If I had my way, I’d have you
    Though it may sound trite and cliché
    But I know I want you so badly
    Worse than a fat man wanting buffet
    These feeling are getting serious
    And beyond games people play
    Wanting fantasy to be reality
    If I could… If I had my way
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    one i can live by if i had my way .....no doubt i would have what i lone and need
    this was so on point and well scribed .... welcome back Arthur
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    arthur:
    I am so luving your pen today.
    Please don't stop....



    Much Luv
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I found your words quite earnest and endearing. Most have felt this way, but can't express it nearly as well. Welcome back poet.
     
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    Make your doubts turn hazy and grey
    Revealing desires you have for me
    Put them clear and on display
    I’d no longer worry about tomorrow
    For you’d be all mine today
    Then, I’d learn the things you delight in
    If I could… If I had my way


    my favorite lines...

    Nice, very nice...Poet


    epiphany:heart: