Black Poetry : If I Coulda Woulda...

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I could reach it
    I would pull a cloud down from your sky
    and that's where your weary head would lie
    If I could teach it
    I'd show you how to put down your armor with me
    dream a full night of star shine, and just simply be
    If I could bear it
    I'd look deep into your eyes until I see thru your visions
    discover the myriad of hues that color your decisions
    If I could share it
    I would be quite understanding and lend you an ear,
    caressing your thoughts til they spoke in ways that I could hear
    All this I would do my dear
    sweetly and gently
    if and only if
    you would let me
     
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    That was really pretty watzinaname, I liked that pulling the cloud from the sky!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely pose'd .....wow
     
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    wow...i enjoyed reading this poem, i loved the description


    needs to be brought back up to the top
     
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    Very,very,very,nice.
    I like this,watz
    It's so pretty, poet.
     
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    Thank you wisdom7, and I'm glad you liked that line. Much appreciated poet.
    Happy to know you liked the way this was posed brotha Rich, thank you.
    Prizefighter16, so nice of you to say that you loved the description, I thank you.
    Thank you for saying you thought this was pretty Sweet baby face. So nice to see you in the forum.
     
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    enjoyed this drop very nice....Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm glad to know you enjoyed it blkangel, thank you.
     
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    re:Coulda

    Watz, This is a beautiful poem with heartfelt verses.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So nice of you to say Poetrymama, you've written some beautiful poetry as well, thank you poet.
     
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